Lalato
Adventurer
The two page layout looks great. I can see that the book will be very pretty.
I stand by my dislike of the super model pose. It just looks completely uncomfortable with her legs splayed out like she's trying to slow down on skis as she barrels down the bunny slope. Add to that the super model quarter turn with hands in unnatural positions, and the boob plate armor... and yeah... not digging it. The skill of the artist is good... just wish it was done differently. It reminds me of a mannequin that's been posed absurdly.