And, with kudos to your proofreader, since these are the first spelling errors I've noticed ...
encounter 2-8 in the red text, 'chiunks' sp 'chunks'. :0
p. 18 'maintaind' sp 'maintains'
p. 21 'attenpt' sp 'attempt'
Obviously doesn't affect game play, but it's an easy fix and, hey, why not?