Silly Putty Comic Summer 2005 - (Winner posted!)

FireLance v. Renton - Judgement

FireLance v. Renton

FireLance advances by default since Renton didn't post a joke. Next tournament will definitely be something "easier" as this is the second time this has happened. :)
 

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demiurge1138 v. DungeonmasterCal

Rel said:
I like both demiurge1138's and DungeonmasterCal's jokes. I mulled them both over for a while and what I came to was this: DMC's felt like more "joke-like" whereas demiurge's seemed more like a parable. Sort of a "bit me once, shame on you. bit me twice, shame on me" homage. In this instance I must give the nod to DMC.

But you can bet I'll be thinking of demiurge the next time I spot the elusive "blue mamba"! ;)

Joshua Dyal said:
Both demiurge1138 and DungeonmasterCal used the punchline very cleverly, I thought, and their jokes were fairly subtle rather than laugh-out-loud.
Since I read them both at work, that's much appreciated! Knowing the punchline ahead of time worked against demiurge1138's entry, because it telegraphed very strongly where it was going early on. DungeonmasterCal's entry, on the other hand, managed to surprise me at the end. I'll give the vote to him by a very thin margin.

reveal said:
Both were good uses of the punchline. demiurge1138's joke felt more like a parable than a joke, though. It was clever but not "ha ha" funny. DungeonmasterCal's, OTOH, made me laugh out loud. The thought of an ettin on jury duty cracked me up. DMC gets my vote.

Judgement - DungeonmasterCal advances by a margin of 3-0.
 



Thanks Demiurge, and thank you judges. I was at a complete loss when I wrote it. I suddenly realized my deadline was coming up, and I was in full panic mode, because I thought Demiurge's was pretty dang good.

I'm ready for my next punch line, I reckon.
 

Yeah, ettin jurors for the win!

I imagine "Twelve Angry Men" (I think that's the original title) with the ettin arguing both for and against the verdict :D
 



FireLance v. DungeonmasterCal

FireLance v. DungeonmasterCal

Punchline - "The monkey learned to aim better."

You've got 72 hours. Good luck! :D
 


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