Spider_Jerusalem
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Spider J
A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour
Chapter 1: Small Beginnings
Forgotten Realms, Early Winter, Realms Date 1372
"You there. Ice mage. Your help is needed"
Thalin Vorspen pushed his way into the Glacier’s Reach. Strange eyes turned from every corner of the tavern. A gust of icy wind ravaged the heavy leather curtains before Thalin heaved the door closed. Ulutiuns, barbarians who live on the meagre benefits of the glacier, were crowded to each of the walls.
A pair of frostbitten half-orcs huddled next to a raging log fire. The bass rumbles of conversations died as Thalin crept across the floor and placed a hand of copper pieces onto the counter,
“A nights rest” coughed Thalin, not looking up.
The half-orc barkeep stared at the owl sitting motionless on Thalin’s shoulder. It stared back, wide eyes locking his in an unnerving stare. Thalin was a little taller than the average human, though his frame was thin and wiry. A scraggly, frost-encrusted beard framed his youthful face.
Thalin looked up from under his wolfskin hood just long enough to make eye contact with the barkeep. The money was taken and a rag of dirty leather with yellow runes daubed on it was thrust into the mage's palm.
Thalin rose early the next morning to the sounds of wagons and horses. After a cruel breakfast of blackbread and cheese, Thalin decided to find a safe passage southwards. He didn't want to spend any more time than he needed to here. Palishuk was the primary trading post between the half-orc traders of Vaasa and the Ulutiuns, yet despite its position of power the town had never expanded beyond its fifteen houses and large market square.
Wagons were herded like horses in the frozen square as half-orcs and Ulutiuns noisily packed their trade goods. Negotiating a quick trade with a half-orc wagon master, Thalin ensured himself a place on the wagon train South. As the preparations for the long journey began, the appearance of humanoids other than half-orcs and Ulutiuns spurred Thalin to attempt conversation. The harsh weather matched the harsh temperaments and nothing was said of any use.
Thalin threw his travel pack onto the fourth cargo wagon, but a scuttle of noise ensued and it was immediately thrown back out as an Ulutiun stepped forwards, towering over Thalin. Dariel dashed his wings wide and dug his talons into Thalin’s shoulder. Ignoring his companion, the young mage quickly made his apologies and carefully checked the fifth carriage was empty before jumping in. After a few delays, the wagon train left.
An hour into his travels, Thalin was buried deep in his spellbook. His studies had hit a standstill. The incantations and musings of the Arch-mage Mellius were thrown together seemingly at random; deciphering a sentence was a weeks work, let alone a complete verse. Celestial verbs had crashed into Elven prose, and then it had spilled into an unknown language, all curling letters and barbed phonetics. Just looking at those words made his head drift somewhere else, somewhere darker, somewhere that shouldn't be.
Thalin placed the book down, closing it firmly. The steady rocking of the wagon train and the monotony of the terrain outside soon found the better of Thalin, and he fell into a cold, fitful sleep.
A jarring halt slid Thalin forwards, ripping him out of his sleep. He instinctively called in his mind to Dariel, but he was gliding nearly a mile ahead of the wagon train, searching for tundra-mice. Thalin cursed silently as his spellbook spilt across the wooden floor in a rustle of parchment. As it did so, a rat nimbly stepped out of the way, then turned and sat up on its haunches, watching Thalin with little onyx eyes.
Slowly crawling to retrieve his spellbook, Thalin picked up scattered pages as he went and moved determinedly towards the crouched rat. But the rat did not move, even as Thalin waved a hand at it.
A man sat huddled in the corner of an otherwise empty carriage, around him a tattered brown cloak was drawn tight. He sat crosslegged, a pole shaped bundle of rags balancing delicately on his knees. Blood was dripping from a deep gash in his side. At his feet sat nearly a dozen rats; all lay attentive to their master in a crude semi-circle.
The figure's eyes glinted open in the darkness of his hood as the carriage lurched to a stop. He looked intensely forwards for a moment, as if searching his mind for something, someone. A shout from outside broke the man’s concentration.
A faint shout from outside drew Thalin’s attention. The rat scuttled to the crack in the carriage door and dropped out.
Thalin, trying to understand what was happening, quickly gathered his possessions. Before he could, a gauntleted hand reached through the gap and thrust the heavy door sideways with considerable ease. A half-orc entombed in platemail and hefting a greatsword over his shoulder stood silhouetted in the doorway. A light snow had fallen outside and the reflection glared over the half-orcs face and armour.
“You there. Ice mage. Your help is needed”, growled the half-orc in surprisingly well-spoken common.
As Thalin went to answer, the carriage jolted into momentum again. A chorus of shouts came from outside accompanied by the sounds of carriage doors being opened and closed. The half-orc dropped away from the door without another word. Thalin considered the consequences of trusting a half-orc’s word, but his curiosity overrode his commonsense. A sudden, high pitched scream from outside pierced his thoughts. Without another moments consideration, Thalin drew his father's scimitar Shard and leapt into the snow.
Milo Whittersbane vaulted the last collapsed wall and burst through the mine entrance and into the sunlight. Stumbling onto the loose stone slope of the Talagbar mines, his small halfling legs skidded from beneath him and he crashed onto his stomach. His weasel companion, Isplit, catapulted through the air, screaming in unison with Milo. The dwarven ghost behind them emitted a hoarse scream as it failed to stop, and fell into the sunlight. Its form dissolved to dust in a whispering sigh. The ancient remnants of the ghost blew over Milo’s face as he propped himself up on his elbows, the swift winds of Vaasa tugging at his clothes as he regained his breath.
Milo let out a relieved whoop and stared again at the gem sitting on the ground next to him. Isplit’s head emerged from underneath Milo’s leg then scurried onto his arm and began to touch the gem with his front paws. Neither halfling nor weasel could believe their luck. A gem the size of an ettin's fist!
The ghosts stood silent in the darkness of the tunnel, the hatred in their eyes following Milo and Isplit as the twosome picked themselves up, grinned back at the undead, then waltzed off down the slope chatting excitedly to each other, Milo’s small hands clutching the long lost Keystone of the Talagbar mines.
“We did it!” shouted Milo, punching the air.
His thoughts were filled with expectation of what Noristour would give him for it. A light snow had fallen since Milo had entered the recently thawed-out mines and the grand expanse of the Vaasa plains lay below him, an even white spread covering everything he could see. Isplit gazed intently into the gem, his eyes wide with delight at the sheer size of the prize.
“How much will it be?” chimed Isplit.
“I’m not sure. Maybe enough to help mother.”
Milo's young halfling face stalling with the thoughts of his mother. Isplit, feeling Milo’s fall of heart, tapped the gem with a claw, “There’s a little axe inside, I can see it!” his voice squeaking with the chance to prove something to his companion.
“I know,” Milo answered quickly, his mind taken away from his mother momentarily, “Its actually a hammer, although I don’t know why it's there. Maybe Noristour does.”
The thoughts of payment, halfling damsels and gems suddenly shrunk away as a distant scream peeled up from the plains below. Milo pulled himself onto the top of a large boulder for a better view.
Even before reaching the top, he saw that a thick curl of smoke dirtied the white landscape, its tail leading to a small patch of trees where the base of the mountain met the plains. A few hundred meters from the smoke, the thin line of a cargo train inched slowly southwards. Milo placed his thumb over the figures milling around the wagons and pretended to squash a horse before another scream shook him to the present.
“We should go down there,” Isplit said with concern.
“Yeah, I guess so. Maybe someone is in trouble,” answered Milo, craning to see a clearer view of the commotion.
“No. I mean maybe we can jump on the wagons, that way we don’t have to walk.”
Milo gave Isplit a stern look before sliding down the front of the boulder and bounding towards the smoke, but not before safely ensuring the gem was tucked tightly into the side pocket of his pack...
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Thanks for taking an interest, and I'm looking forward to your comments...
Spider J
A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour
Chapter 1: Small Beginnings
Forgotten Realms, Early Winter, Realms Date 1372
"You there. Ice mage. Your help is needed"
Thalin Vorspen pushed his way into the Glacier’s Reach. Strange eyes turned from every corner of the tavern. A gust of icy wind ravaged the heavy leather curtains before Thalin heaved the door closed. Ulutiuns, barbarians who live on the meagre benefits of the glacier, were crowded to each of the walls.
A pair of frostbitten half-orcs huddled next to a raging log fire. The bass rumbles of conversations died as Thalin crept across the floor and placed a hand of copper pieces onto the counter,
“A nights rest” coughed Thalin, not looking up.
The half-orc barkeep stared at the owl sitting motionless on Thalin’s shoulder. It stared back, wide eyes locking his in an unnerving stare. Thalin was a little taller than the average human, though his frame was thin and wiry. A scraggly, frost-encrusted beard framed his youthful face.
Thalin looked up from under his wolfskin hood just long enough to make eye contact with the barkeep. The money was taken and a rag of dirty leather with yellow runes daubed on it was thrust into the mage's palm.
- - - - - - - - - -
Thalin rose early the next morning to the sounds of wagons and horses. After a cruel breakfast of blackbread and cheese, Thalin decided to find a safe passage southwards. He didn't want to spend any more time than he needed to here. Palishuk was the primary trading post between the half-orc traders of Vaasa and the Ulutiuns, yet despite its position of power the town had never expanded beyond its fifteen houses and large market square.
Wagons were herded like horses in the frozen square as half-orcs and Ulutiuns noisily packed their trade goods. Negotiating a quick trade with a half-orc wagon master, Thalin ensured himself a place on the wagon train South. As the preparations for the long journey began, the appearance of humanoids other than half-orcs and Ulutiuns spurred Thalin to attempt conversation. The harsh weather matched the harsh temperaments and nothing was said of any use.
Thalin threw his travel pack onto the fourth cargo wagon, but a scuttle of noise ensued and it was immediately thrown back out as an Ulutiun stepped forwards, towering over Thalin. Dariel dashed his wings wide and dug his talons into Thalin’s shoulder. Ignoring his companion, the young mage quickly made his apologies and carefully checked the fifth carriage was empty before jumping in. After a few delays, the wagon train left.
- - - - - - - - - -
An hour into his travels, Thalin was buried deep in his spellbook. His studies had hit a standstill. The incantations and musings of the Arch-mage Mellius were thrown together seemingly at random; deciphering a sentence was a weeks work, let alone a complete verse. Celestial verbs had crashed into Elven prose, and then it had spilled into an unknown language, all curling letters and barbed phonetics. Just looking at those words made his head drift somewhere else, somewhere darker, somewhere that shouldn't be.
Thalin placed the book down, closing it firmly. The steady rocking of the wagon train and the monotony of the terrain outside soon found the better of Thalin, and he fell into a cold, fitful sleep.
A jarring halt slid Thalin forwards, ripping him out of his sleep. He instinctively called in his mind to Dariel, but he was gliding nearly a mile ahead of the wagon train, searching for tundra-mice. Thalin cursed silently as his spellbook spilt across the wooden floor in a rustle of parchment. As it did so, a rat nimbly stepped out of the way, then turned and sat up on its haunches, watching Thalin with little onyx eyes.
Slowly crawling to retrieve his spellbook, Thalin picked up scattered pages as he went and moved determinedly towards the crouched rat. But the rat did not move, even as Thalin waved a hand at it.
- - - - - - - - - -
A man sat huddled in the corner of an otherwise empty carriage, around him a tattered brown cloak was drawn tight. He sat crosslegged, a pole shaped bundle of rags balancing delicately on his knees. Blood was dripping from a deep gash in his side. At his feet sat nearly a dozen rats; all lay attentive to their master in a crude semi-circle.
The figure's eyes glinted open in the darkness of his hood as the carriage lurched to a stop. He looked intensely forwards for a moment, as if searching his mind for something, someone. A shout from outside broke the man’s concentration.
- - - - - - - - - -
A faint shout from outside drew Thalin’s attention. The rat scuttled to the crack in the carriage door and dropped out.
Thalin, trying to understand what was happening, quickly gathered his possessions. Before he could, a gauntleted hand reached through the gap and thrust the heavy door sideways with considerable ease. A half-orc entombed in platemail and hefting a greatsword over his shoulder stood silhouetted in the doorway. A light snow had fallen outside and the reflection glared over the half-orcs face and armour.
“You there. Ice mage. Your help is needed”, growled the half-orc in surprisingly well-spoken common.
As Thalin went to answer, the carriage jolted into momentum again. A chorus of shouts came from outside accompanied by the sounds of carriage doors being opened and closed. The half-orc dropped away from the door without another word. Thalin considered the consequences of trusting a half-orc’s word, but his curiosity overrode his commonsense. A sudden, high pitched scream from outside pierced his thoughts. Without another moments consideration, Thalin drew his father's scimitar Shard and leapt into the snow.
- - - - - - - - - -
Milo Whittersbane vaulted the last collapsed wall and burst through the mine entrance and into the sunlight. Stumbling onto the loose stone slope of the Talagbar mines, his small halfling legs skidded from beneath him and he crashed onto his stomach. His weasel companion, Isplit, catapulted through the air, screaming in unison with Milo. The dwarven ghost behind them emitted a hoarse scream as it failed to stop, and fell into the sunlight. Its form dissolved to dust in a whispering sigh. The ancient remnants of the ghost blew over Milo’s face as he propped himself up on his elbows, the swift winds of Vaasa tugging at his clothes as he regained his breath.
Milo let out a relieved whoop and stared again at the gem sitting on the ground next to him. Isplit’s head emerged from underneath Milo’s leg then scurried onto his arm and began to touch the gem with his front paws. Neither halfling nor weasel could believe their luck. A gem the size of an ettin's fist!
The ghosts stood silent in the darkness of the tunnel, the hatred in their eyes following Milo and Isplit as the twosome picked themselves up, grinned back at the undead, then waltzed off down the slope chatting excitedly to each other, Milo’s small hands clutching the long lost Keystone of the Talagbar mines.
“We did it!” shouted Milo, punching the air.
His thoughts were filled with expectation of what Noristour would give him for it. A light snow had fallen since Milo had entered the recently thawed-out mines and the grand expanse of the Vaasa plains lay below him, an even white spread covering everything he could see. Isplit gazed intently into the gem, his eyes wide with delight at the sheer size of the prize.
“How much will it be?” chimed Isplit.
“I’m not sure. Maybe enough to help mother.”
Milo's young halfling face stalling with the thoughts of his mother. Isplit, feeling Milo’s fall of heart, tapped the gem with a claw, “There’s a little axe inside, I can see it!” his voice squeaking with the chance to prove something to his companion.
“I know,” Milo answered quickly, his mind taken away from his mother momentarily, “Its actually a hammer, although I don’t know why it's there. Maybe Noristour does.”
The thoughts of payment, halfling damsels and gems suddenly shrunk away as a distant scream peeled up from the plains below. Milo pulled himself onto the top of a large boulder for a better view.
Even before reaching the top, he saw that a thick curl of smoke dirtied the white landscape, its tail leading to a small patch of trees where the base of the mountain met the plains. A few hundred meters from the smoke, the thin line of a cargo train inched slowly southwards. Milo placed his thumb over the figures milling around the wagons and pretended to squash a horse before another scream shook him to the present.
“We should go down there,” Isplit said with concern.
“Yeah, I guess so. Maybe someone is in trouble,” answered Milo, craning to see a clearer view of the commotion.
“No. I mean maybe we can jump on the wagons, that way we don’t have to walk.”
Milo gave Isplit a stern look before sliding down the front of the boulder and bounding towards the smoke, but not before safely ensuring the gem was tucked tightly into the side pocket of his pack...
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