Just lists? Here is longer explanation.
Many spells are in need of rule clarification. I went a bit overboard with explanations my spells included (considering especially the fact, that my english is lacking, what also causes me to use too many words to say things that could be said simplier).
Few spells of mine in guide are actually half-finished.' Healing of Innocen't and ' Miracle of Fertility' come to mind.
Also, especially with my spells, there is constant mistake of short range spells range being 25 feet+ 5 feet/level, not +5/every second level, as it goes in PHB. This was misreading at my part long time ago. Also, my spells have sometimes name referance to 'sorcerer'. This comes form fact, that in my world some spells are only available to sorcerers of certain Path. .Linked Shapechange p.93 is a good example of this weidness. That in mind, they should be shared with divane magic users, I think.
My spells are not worse examples of this, some standardization might be in order. Durations, ranges, saves, all that.
Many old spells suffer from 'Second edition aka AD&D system backflashs. Like -4 or whatever to save, without a mention of 'what save'? Will, fort, ref?
Material component suffer now and then from same silliness, than components in phb (especially the earlier editions). I hate stupid
material components, but it's my personal bias only. I think components should make sense, that's all.
With some pleasure spells, right 'condition' referances from DMG might be in order, like 'as if shaken'. Might be usefull to be able to
compare pleasurable action-limiting condition to pain/fear action-limiting condition.
Some mentions of domains might be missing/where there shoudn't be one. Though I didn't check this one carefully. If someone did, has this been corrected?
Change Sexual Preference spells uses 2nd edition charm person spell tables. Good or bad, *shrug*
Reversed version of spell is with some spells mentioned in earlier edition style or referance is to converse/reverse version, but text
doesn't state which spell is one for that. Like with Homophobia/Heterophobia
Some spells don't do much system-wise, but they have more profaund role-play effects. Spells causing certain form of insanity fall into this category.
Annihilator's Penis of Power - Better suited to anime genre but -> I suggest we keep this, at least in some book
Bitch Slap - Stupid and offensive spell idea (latter more so, because there is no similar evil to men here)
Cause Nausea - We have brain lock in psi book, we have hold person, this does same, but as 1st level spell... be gone
Chains of Lust - Alternative method to planar binding maybe or ritual magic. I'd edit out some mmh... comments at least
Charm Man I-IX - There was once a dragon magazine with Witch npc character class. Pointless.
Coyanascotsy's Erotic Permanency - 3rd level spell, oh, please. Breaks every rule there is.
Davenet's Seduction? - Intresting, but needs rule tweaking and we do have many charms already
Detect Venereal Disease? (a specialized Version and therefor maybe usefull) - Very specific purpose, so why not, good minor magic for bordels. But int check, how hard int check?
Flash - Yep, predestication effect.
Heartbraker - Lame death magic, doesn't work in rule sense, and I'd use spell name for some other effect anyway. Good name, rest isn't
Ilruna's Impotence - Beginning idea is of some intrest. bit rules-wise it gets weird. I'd rather create curse, which causes one to be unable to experience sexual pleasure with only certain named createre. Actually have written such curse.
Indifference - Similar spell exist, right? It is also a bit confusing. Indifference? It also should be highter level.
Layla’s Beautification - too 2nd edition. I actually have written nasty, and probably overpowered spell of this one.
Layla’s Good Morning - I like this spell, sort of, it should be written to make more sense, however, there is hangover-removing spell in Relics & RItuals.
Layla’s Morning After -' Forget' spell, effectually.
Layla’s Uglification - Same problem as with Beautification.
Mount - Liked the idea, but I call my spell 'Illusionary Lover', and it is different. This one doesn't work in rule sense.
Our Tiny Brothel - I'd rather do little tweaking to regular spells, that create magical dwellings. Silly name.
Pornographic Glamer - Workable combo-spell IMO. Many designers have made combo-effect spells, it is kind of cooler and useful, than casting two different spells.
Prismatic Dildo? (should go to the "Hentai"-Guide?) - Funny, nasty, rule-tweaking needed. Hentai, yep.
Seduction I-VI - Charm with a twist. I like it, but I'd combo it to be same spell, HD affected depending on caster level.
Sexual Attraction - Limited 'stat-rising' spell (for limited situations), useful for low-level casters, I'd keep this. Change duration to 1 hour/levl.
Sexual Disgust - Limited 'stat-lowering'' spell, useful for low-level casters, I'd keep this. Change duration to 1 hour/levl.
Skank - Well, as effect why not. But name change needed, and effect itself might fit into category of 3rd level bestow curse spell. If you look at bestow curse effects carefully, you realize how devastating it can be.*
Slap - Predestication- type effect.
Speedy Gestation-Variation - Yep, too complicated and we already have one. Besides, wasn't it ME writing that one. If so, let it be GONE.
Summon Cissaldan - I've read the short story, and this spell totally fails to translate idea to actual useful spell. I've always hated it. Let it be GONE.
Touch of Talopea? (to powerful in Combat, I think) - Perhaps it should be 3rd level spell. It really is no worse than wizard casting lighting bolt at enemy mage. Then again, is it really much more powerful, than hold person?
Tweak/ Goose - Your nasty use of existing spells. Goes to predestigation category.
PSIONICS
Willy’s Partial Expansion - Well, don't know. Fantastic Four superheroes had Mr Fantastic and his rubbery body, but making body part's bigger is mostly stuff of jokes. Mostly, there is whole genre of porn deserved for this enlargening stuff.
Rest Mentiond my Isewa.
Spells
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Embarrassing Fetish - Idea nice, rule tweaking. Needed, much. Might also work well as variation effect of some existing spell/psionic power.
Freudian Thoughts - Name change desperately needed. Too modern fantasy-Earth. Otherwise idea of spell, that curses person to think sex/food/treasure/cleaniness all the time is a very good idea. I suggest we create more general obsession spell of this.
Heterophobia/Homophobia - stupid component and all, but ideas are good. Role-play neastiness elements would work better with longer spell duration. Rule tweakin needed.
Luwain's Everlasting Hard-On (perhaps just a name change) - What's wrong with name? Rule Tweaking needed.
Masturbation - Evil spell, not silly at all. Too low level for effect, however.
PMS - Nah, it's actually very logical spell (name change needed, too 20th century). Think that female spellcaster, who wanted to teach less-than-understanding men (perhaps her huspand), about certain pain, woman has to endure.
Power Word, Castrate - Evil and usable spell, but it should have rules for damage (if any), or some other mention of psysical/psychological effect. What as spell to use on enemy army, "that takes care of those soldiers who'd otherwise trying to rape our people".
Resist Self - I wrote this spell. Yes, silly name (hah, but I like it), purposifully. Remove somatic component effect, it was kinda joke anyway. Rule tweaking needed.. did. It is actually very useful spell... to certain character of mine at least.
Strip - Bad rules. Way too powerful. There should be save.
Items
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Castration weapons - Again, lacking actual rule what additional effect (damage etc) castaration makes, if any. Not actually silly as such... but hard to imagine how it works.
Raping weapons - Whaaaat? I can imagine dancing/raping weapon in hentai-suppliment, but this kind of raping weapon is just.... what? Change the whole effect when doing raping weapons, this won't work.
Dagger of Circumcision (debatable) - Name is misleading. Effect as now, debatable yes.
Rod of Pillows - I think this is sort of nice. But for effect +2 to sleep spell, there would have to be some other spell to this item's creation besides 'major creation'.
Rod of Vibration - Somewhat fantasy earth, but not too much so, really. Maybe little tweaking in effects needed.
Tentacular Staffs - Cool. Take them to 'hentai suppliment' however.
Phallic Wands - Hehheh, neat idea, effects might be a bit off.
Sheet of Useful Toys - Neat idea, but a bit too.. well stupid. Tweak it a little, remove 'too much 20th century' and it becomes uselful item.
Strap-On of Astounding - Cutie... but too expensive to be more than perhaps some unique creation of some bored, wealthy wizard or something. Doesn't deserve place as 'foundable magic item'.
Teeny-Weeny Bikini - Not very usable or cool effect for something costing 12 000 gp
Underwear items - Everclean underwear/clothes always comfortable clothes etc, would actually be useful. This takes it to some.. well silly direction.
Monsters
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Recondite - This monster is not silly. It is very evil. It makes a good plot hook. Tantacled demons allergy must be some boy-thing.
Skirtseeker - Name change might be in order. I can well imagine some twisted demon worshipping mage to create such race. Such creatures might also be enchanted to spread magical disease and other dark things like that.
Twat Mouse - I can guess what sector of net porn inspired this one. Not very interesting or useful IMO.
Wild Oats - Quite neat mythology creature IMO, comes with dryad too.
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My comments
Freudian Thoughts - Name change, this is too fantasy-earth. I commented this earlier.
Lovesickness - Good example of rule-weirdness. May wear off as charm person, but may be removed with cure disease. I don't care if it's supposed to be joke.. harhar... love... being sick.. whatever. Rule correction desperately needed.
Playmate - Tanilen is very right about spell-level IMO.
Potency - A&D rule leftover warning.
Prevent Nausea - Why limit effect to women? Nausea is very common effect in many children sickness etc, so why only think pregnant women (I guess, that was the idea)? Besides there is spell 'Revulsion', nausea is nausea, after all.
Also, Tentacular staffs and such might have good home at hentai suppliment.
Also, we are lacking all those golems, that make replicas for lovers. Actually, this kind of creatures are common in mythology (if unique).
Rule tweaking needed... a lot.
*Bestow curse/cause disease spells need a lot of variation effects. I have a lot of evil wizard/necromancer/demon/witch curses in my game.
Many *I want to cause nasty change/behavior alteration* in person actually fit under effect of those spells. In role-play heavy
games socially devastating effects might be needed to be more high level spells, but since we are using PHB spells as basis.
I'd base spell level to actual game static it causes, or overall power effect can grant.
More uses (=abuses) for 'normal' spell texts might be in order.
