anonystu
J'Accuse PirateCat!
Comments:
The Story Arc is good stuff. Note there is an outstanding issue of: "How did you get from the mental asylum to the team?", but until the issue is introduced:
"Dr. Saint, why did they let you out of the asylum?"
"Wait a second, you never told us you were in an asylum?"
there's no need to figure that out.
Traits:
The edges need more story: here's what I'd relabel them as:
Edges:
Ex-Professor of Comparative Religion
Divinely Possessed: receives visions through the angel Tezdekel, unknown to him, this possession lets him travel to the Astral plane.
Connections:
Father Richard Jenkins
(someone else)
+1 edge/connection
This is using a version of the mythology in which it is possession which allows astral travel, and the degree of the possession indicates the ease of dealing with the other plane.
The Story Arc is good stuff. Note there is an outstanding issue of: "How did you get from the mental asylum to the team?", but until the issue is introduced:
"Dr. Saint, why did they let you out of the asylum?"
"Wait a second, you never told us you were in an asylum?"
there's no need to figure that out.
Traits:
The edges need more story: here's what I'd relabel them as:
Edges:
Ex-Professor of Comparative Religion
Divinely Possessed: receives visions through the angel Tezdekel, unknown to him, this possession lets him travel to the Astral plane.
Connections:
Father Richard Jenkins
(someone else)
+1 edge/connection
This is using a version of the mythology in which it is possession which allows astral travel, and the degree of the possession indicates the ease of dealing with the other plane.