Reviewing
Seramil:
1) Scale mail automatically brings down base speed, whether you've reached medium encuberance or not. Fixed.
2) I don't entirely understand your weapon entries. I think you're trying to deliniate the normal and the power attack version of your sword cane attack (in which case I'd probably just do the normal entry with a note that Power Attack can be applied to it, myself), but I'm thrown by the "(Fang)" annotation on the first line. Can you clarify what that is?
2a) On the same note, Seramil can wield the sword cane with two hands since she isn't carrying any kind of shield, which allows her to apply 1-1/2 her STR bonus to damage rolls (and stacks with Power Attack). If that's your plan, adjust accordingly.
3) You have to choose your second favored class at 1st level, even though you only take one level in one class at this time, and even if you don't currently have any multi-classing plans. I've put a couple placeholder question marks there for you to replace with whatever you decide on.
4) As someone else pointed out, you can't take 2 traits from the same category. Being a half-elf, though, Seramil qualifies for Elven Reflexes, which is a race trait with the exact same mechanical benefit, so I swapped that out for you.
5) Had the wrong ability mod on some skills. Fixed. Also added labels to explain the Misc modifiers
6) Half-elves don't reach adulthood until 20 years old, then you add on a few years based on which class you chose. In the case of fighter, the youngest starting age is 22 for a half-elf. I'm not sure there's any special mechanical problem with having your half-elf start younger than the standard, but you should probably have a fluff reason for why she's so much younger than anyone else of her heritage in this kind of work.
3 is a dealbreaker in my opinion, though it's a quick fix. I'd also like to get 2 sorted out. so
NOT YET
