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<blockquote data-quote="Ltheb Silverfrond" data-source="post: 4092253" data-attributes="member: 39867"><p>Ok, here's what I saw after skimming through the portfolios. [Sblock]</p><p>Charity (Prophet) (Single/Double): Divine Custodian - What exactly does this mean, and how does it work? It sounds neat but is vague. </p><p>Death (Greater Deity) (Single/Double): Negative Energy Absorption - Not all negative energy effects drain levels. Mechanically, won't matter since, as an undead, you are already healed by the non-level draining effects...</p><p>Disease (First One) (Double): Transgenic - Works differently than the Transient power of the same name. Should probably have a different name, or change the transient power to prevent confusion.</p><p>Entropy (Dominion Section): Shouldn't create planar/dimensional cities, but rather planar/dimensional holes in the ground. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> (It says cities, but that seems entirely inappropriate given the 'favored place')</p><p>Evil (Evil Domain): The Epic spells should probably be removed; Hellball and Damnation might be cool but it makes the list look odd. (Since few others have epic spells).</p><p>Fear (Appearance Section) (Single/Double): Lists a will save, but DC is unwritten.</p><p>Labor (Dominion Section) (Layer): Sinister is misspelled, and the text is also unfinished. </p><p>Luck (Prophet) (Single: Blur - It says 20% as per displacement, but displacement grant 50%. Should be as per the spell blur.</p><p>Nature (Demeanor Section) (Double): This is not finished.</p><p>Sword Portfolio (Greater Deity) (Double): Sword Absorption - How long does this last? Is it intended to be permanent? </p><p>Elf Portfolio (Dominion Section): Plane - What the heck is this even saying? Perhaps it should read 'Your layer dominates an entire plane.' (and perhaps going on to talk about some elves or something)</p><p>Revenge (Greater Deity) (Single/Double): BloodstainedSoul - Should have a space. ("Bloodstained Soul")</p><p>Science (Dominion Section) (Layer): There is no space at the end of the first sentence, and no capital 'A' begining the next. (And the next sentence shouldn't start with 'and'; I would just replace the periods with a comma and make it one sentence)</p><p>Sky Portfolio: The grey boxes of the tables (and in the appearance section) are not aligned vertically.</p><p>Stoicism: Two things: 1. The Double Portfolio Demeanor section is not finished. 2. There are two 'Dominion' Sections!</p><p>Strength (Dominion Section): Why would a god of strength want a planar city? Why not a planar Gym or Arena?</p><p>Sun (Old One) (Single): Dark Pariah - There are no 'Dark' based spells... You mean darkness right?</p><p>Theivery (First One) (Double): Sneak and Destroy - The description isn't finished. </p><p>War (Greater Deity) (Single): Warrior's Soul - The 'Always Active' listing on the table is not spaced correctly.</p><p>Wealth (Old One) (Double): Soniferous - Has the same text as the Soniferous listing above it, should probably say "Increase the value of one artifact eightfold (triple its power)".</p><p>[/sblock]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ltheb Silverfrond, post: 4092253, member: 39867"] Ok, here's what I saw after skimming through the portfolios. [Sblock] Charity (Prophet) (Single/Double): Divine Custodian - What exactly does this mean, and how does it work? It sounds neat but is vague. Death (Greater Deity) (Single/Double): Negative Energy Absorption - Not all negative energy effects drain levels. Mechanically, won't matter since, as an undead, you are already healed by the non-level draining effects... Disease (First One) (Double): Transgenic - Works differently than the Transient power of the same name. Should probably have a different name, or change the transient power to prevent confusion. Entropy (Dominion Section): Shouldn't create planar/dimensional cities, but rather planar/dimensional holes in the ground. :) (It says cities, but that seems entirely inappropriate given the 'favored place') Evil (Evil Domain): The Epic spells should probably be removed; Hellball and Damnation might be cool but it makes the list look odd. (Since few others have epic spells). Fear (Appearance Section) (Single/Double): Lists a will save, but DC is unwritten. Labor (Dominion Section) (Layer): Sinister is misspelled, and the text is also unfinished. Luck (Prophet) (Single: Blur - It says 20% as per displacement, but displacement grant 50%. Should be as per the spell blur. Nature (Demeanor Section) (Double): This is not finished. Sword Portfolio (Greater Deity) (Double): Sword Absorption - How long does this last? Is it intended to be permanent? Elf Portfolio (Dominion Section): Plane - What the heck is this even saying? Perhaps it should read 'Your layer dominates an entire plane.' (and perhaps going on to talk about some elves or something) Revenge (Greater Deity) (Single/Double): BloodstainedSoul - Should have a space. ("Bloodstained Soul") Science (Dominion Section) (Layer): There is no space at the end of the first sentence, and no capital 'A' begining the next. (And the next sentence shouldn't start with 'and'; I would just replace the periods with a comma and make it one sentence) Sky Portfolio: The grey boxes of the tables (and in the appearance section) are not aligned vertically. Stoicism: Two things: 1. The Double Portfolio Demeanor section is not finished. 2. There are two 'Dominion' Sections! Strength (Dominion Section): Why would a god of strength want a planar city? Why not a planar Gym or Arena? Sun (Old One) (Single): Dark Pariah - There are no 'Dark' based spells... You mean darkness right? Theivery (First One) (Double): Sneak and Destroy - The description isn't finished. War (Greater Deity) (Single): Warrior's Soul - The 'Always Active' listing on the table is not spaced correctly. Wealth (Old One) (Double): Soniferous - Has the same text as the Soniferous listing above it, should probably say "Increase the value of one artifact eightfold (triple its power)". [/sblock] [/QUOTE]
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