FriendlyFiend
Explorer
Hmm ... the crunch in the article seemed nice but I have to say I wasn't overly enamoured of the quality of the writing in H1. Look at the description of the keep ...
One short paragraph and yet clearing, cleared and clearly pop up 5 times. That's the kind of thing that would get hammered in any creative writing class. This may seem petty (actually, let's face it, it is petty) but when the writing quality drops off, my desire to purchase the module falls too.
(My emphasis)Ahead, the narrow track widens into a clearing. Great piles of shattered stone blocks and scorched timbers dominate the clearing, sprawling out from its center to the edge of the woods. No plants grow among the ruins or within the clearing. The ground is bare dirt, and although the forest has begun to reclaim the path leading here, it has not intruded into the ruins of Shadowfell Keep. Yet clearly someone has tampered with the ruins. In the center of the debris, stone blocks and timbers have been gathered into a pile. Someone has cleared a path through the rubble and pulled aside the wreckage to reveal a stone staircase. The staircase descends into darkness.
One short paragraph and yet clearing, cleared and clearly pop up 5 times. That's the kind of thing that would get hammered in any creative writing class. This may seem petty (actually, let's face it, it is petty) but when the writing quality drops off, my desire to purchase the module falls too.