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Need a quick critique on two covers...
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Thornir Alekeg
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I would agree with a font change for the subtitle on the second cover. I first read it as: Buly Horror Behind Enemy Zines.
Also agree that for Old School, the title and sword should be higher.
I would also prefer that the sword edges be a little sharper.
Also agree that for Old School, the title and sword should be higher.
I would also prefer that the sword edges be a little sharper.
Patryn of Elvenshae
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I also couldn't tell whether your second book was titled "Schattenjager" or "Echattenjager."
That might not be worthy of complaint, however.*
Your gold text on the light blue background isn't really working for me, particularly where the folds in the satin (the lighter blue sections) have a tendency to wash out the detail on your calligraphy "S" in "School."
In images 2 and 3, we've lost the detail in the crest on the sword blade. It used to be an eagle, and now it's kind of a blurry purple shape. You've also just about lost the fuller on the blade, as well.
All in all, I'd say I like #1 the best - doubly so if you can fix the "S" issue I mentioned above.
EDIT, To add:
* - Other than that minor issue, I really, really like your second cover. It's black. It's red. It's probably got Nazi zombies. It communicates that extremely well and with extreme simplicity. Well done!
That might not be worthy of complaint, however.*
Your gold text on the light blue background isn't really working for me, particularly where the folds in the satin (the lighter blue sections) have a tendency to wash out the detail on your calligraphy "S" in "School."
In images 2 and 3, we've lost the detail in the crest on the sword blade. It used to be an eagle, and now it's kind of a blurry purple shape. You've also just about lost the fuller on the blade, as well.
All in all, I'd say I like #1 the best - doubly so if you can fix the "S" issue I mentioned above.
EDIT, To add:
* - Other than that minor issue, I really, really like your second cover. It's black. It's red. It's probably got Nazi zombies. It communicates that extremely well and with extreme simplicity. Well done!
Turanil
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Excellent work. I particularly like the second one. Concerning the blue cover I just want to remind you this : RVB colors are far better looking than CMJN colors, particularly for a many shades of blue and green. I can only guess both colors were done in RVB. Turn them into CMJN files (as you can only print CMJN), and you could have unpleasant surprises.
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"Old School" is properly placed to the left of and above the crosspiece, but consider:
1) Making the font larger and stacking the words Left Justified.
2) Moving "High Fantasy Roleplay" below the crosspiece, with a slightly larger font, and stacking them Left Justified.
3) Making the sword-blade more visible. I understand that your source image may have been bad, but a little patience with even an outdated art/graphic editing program (assuming it has a "magnify" feature) would let you add harder, brighter edges to the blade.
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The "S" HAS to be made clearer, and the "P" should be. I wouldn't exchange "Occult" for "Pulp" but might consider ADDING it. Still, as is, "Pulp" + "Horror" spells it out pretty well.
"Old School" is properly placed to the left of and above the crosspiece, but consider:
1) Making the font larger and stacking the words Left Justified.
2) Moving "High Fantasy Roleplay" below the crosspiece, with a slightly larger font, and stacking them Left Justified.
3) Making the sword-blade more visible. I understand that your source image may have been bad, but a little patience with even an outdated art/graphic editing program (assuming it has a "magnify" feature) would let you add harder, brighter edges to the blade.
Image 2
The "S" HAS to be made clearer, and the "P" should be. I wouldn't exchange "Occult" for "Pulp" but might consider ADDING it. Still, as is, "Pulp" + "Horror" spells it out pretty well.
Patryn of Elvenshae
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jdrakeh said:Thanks. Oh... and Nazi Lich Lords
Awesome. I've always wanted to play Castle Wolfenstein: The RPG.
Am I wrong, or does that translate as "Shadowhunter"?
They look good! It's always inspiring to see people get creative and sharing their work. I just have a few suggestions:
1. I think the Old English font is VERY difficult to read (for both the big title and small subtitle text). I would consider using a lighter, less script-y font.
2. I think both pages are too centered. Asymmetrical layouts are more "active" and interesting to look at.
3. If you are going to do more page layouts inside your books, I would highly recommend the book "The Non-Designer's Design Book" ( http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0321193857/ ). It looks a little cheesy, but it's very clear, informative, and pretty cheap ($13).
1. I think the Old English font is VERY difficult to read (for both the big title and small subtitle text). I would consider using a lighter, less script-y font.
2. I think both pages are too centered. Asymmetrical layouts are more "active" and interesting to look at.
3. If you are going to do more page layouts inside your books, I would highly recommend the book "The Non-Designer's Design Book" ( http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0321193857/ ). It looks a little cheesy, but it's very clear, informative, and pretty cheap ($13).
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