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Darmanicus said:Ok so I know I've posted this once already but nobody took the time to reply,(sob)! Well if at first you don't succeed etc. etc. I have revised this somewhat since last time but I really could do with the knowledge of all you sages out there because as far as my DM is concerned, he's a s clueless as me when it comes to creating spells.
You might not like my opinion
I don't think it is a good spell. You are inventing a new mechanism for avoiding attacks, but it isn't well defined enough. Furthermore 33% of the random bonuses are far too powerful (+5 to DCs? +5 to caster level?).
I'm afraid I wouldn't even consider this spell at any spell level.
What is it that you are trying to do? create a defensive spell with some offensive potential, create an offensive spell with some defensive potential? Add some mechanics to a cool idea?