DragonSword said:
If I adapt a third party's OGC for use in my own, how do I represent that in S15. I'm not using it as if, but am adapting it to make it slightly more balanced.
From the text of the Open Game License proper:
Definitions:
“Derivative Material" means copyrighted material including derivative works and translations (including into other computer languages), potation, modification, correction, addition, extension, upgrade, improvement, compilation, abridgment or other form in
which an existing work may be recast, transformed or adapted
“Open Game Content" means the game mechanic and includes the methods, procedures,
processes and routines to the extent such content does not embody the Product Identity and is an enhancement over the prior art and any additional content clearly identified as Open Game Content by the Contributor, and means any work covered by this License, including translations and derivative works under copyright law, but specifically excludes Product Identity;
“Use," “Used," or “Using" means to use, Distribute, copy, edit, format, modify, translate, and otherwise create Derivative Material of Open Game Content;
6. NOTICE OF LICENSE COPYRIGHT: You must update the COPYRIGHT NOTICE portion of this License to include the exact text of the COPYRIGHT NOTICE of any Open Game Content You are copying, modifying or distributing, and You must add the title, the copyright date, and the copyright holder's name to the COPYRIGHT NOTICE of any original Open Game Content you Distribute.
So, from your description, you are in fact "modifying or distributing" open game content, and thus you "include the exact text of the COPYRIGHT NOTICE of any Open Game Content You are copying, modifying or distributing"