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The largest, who wears a chef's hat and stained apron looks at you and shouts 'Bree-yark!'"
Bree-yark?! Thems fighting words...
The largest, who wears a chef's hat and stained apron looks at you and shouts 'Bree-yark!'"
Bree-yark?! Thems fighting words...
"You burst through the door and find yourself in a reeking kitchen. A huge fire burns against the back wall. A wide table covered with rotted meat stands to your left. Six leering goblins crowd the chamber. The largest, who wears a chef's hat and stained apron looks at you and shouts 'Bree-yark!'"
The players need to know where they are (a kitchen) and they need to know any features that might be tactically interesting (a table for higher ground, a fire to push enemies into). They don't need to know the contents of the spice rack or what's inside the cabinets.
No way. Bree-yark means "we surrender" in goblin. That small beer hating bartender at the keep told me so. He wouldn't lie to me. Right?
Well considered and generally good advice snipped.
Later on, one of my buddies got a projector and I started doing all of my maps with Campaign Cartographer. I'd just project the room up on the wall and everybody could tell at a glance where the table and fire were. I would just give a quick overview. "You burst into a filthy kitchen packed with goblins. The stench of smoke and foul meat is overwhelming."
I'd go with something like this:
"A group of goblins crowd what is clearly a kitchen; the largest wears a chef's hat and stained apron. A huge fire dominates one wall, with a large table against the other. The room is heavy with the stench of smoke and rotting meat."
That said, recently I've moved away from a prose format for descriptive text--even when short, it's boring to listen to someone read. I've gone with using bullet points, because they encourage me to deliver the info in a manner that's more spontaneous, rather than just reading them. So I'd actually go with:
- Group of goblins, room feels crowded
- Largest wears stained apron and chef's hat
- Huge fireplace dominates one wall; large table
- Stench of smoke and rotting meat