Short Fiction (latest update - The Boogeyman)

[Ashy]

Stop the Madness is very stream of consciousness an while very powerful and full of mind-tweaking imagery, is more suited, IMHO, to a free form poem than a short story.

However, Boogeyman is absolutely freakin' excellent!!! YOU MUST continue this story!!! It is your absolute duty!!!! I cannot wait to read more!

 

[Jinx]

Buses always reminded him that other people had problems too, for some reason, but this never comforted him.

Awesome. That's my favorite line.

 

[Sniktch]

Thank you, everyone, for the praise, and thank you, Ashwyn, for the critique - your comments on 'Despair' I find particularly helpful.

My favorite line I think is 'and the real monster walked into the room.' (Am I allowed to have a favorite line from my own story?) But I really like the whole thing; I feel this might be my best work. Now the trick is to continue it without losing quality...

 

[Ashy]

Of the limited amount of what I have seen, Boogeyman is definitely your best work so far - KEEP GOING!

 

[Mathew_Freeman]

Woo! Great stuff, Sniktch!