Welcoming constructive comments on "Fairy Dreaming"

[Grail Quest]

I have posted a partial writeup on one of my two campaign worlds. This one is "Fairy Dreaming", a low-magic fairy-tale type setting with knights and fairies and monsters.

It can be downloaded (free) here: http://www.freewebs.com/d20elements

Looking for constructive comments on it as I continue to write it up and update it.

The very first chapter contains a scratchpad of ideas that are meant to set the tone and theme of the campaign world.

 

[Grail Quest]

Update!

The free-to-download Fairy Dreaming setting has been updated!

For anyone daunted by the 1.4M Word file, this has now been split up into a file for the setting, and a separate file for the world map, both of which are less than 300K.

A zipped file is also available.

NEW: Fiction "The Wolf's Bride" has been uploaded. It features the PCs Lady Emma and Aspirant Millicent in one of the PC roles in Fairy Dreaming--that of "fairy tale troubleshooters".

As usual, follow the link in the sidebar from http://www.freewebs.com/d20elements to access these goodies.

Constructive feedback always appreciated.