L4W:PC:Alexander Duran (Atanatotatos)

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Contents 1 Summary 2 Fluff 3 Math 4 Show Math 4.1 Ability Scores 4.2 Attacks 4.3 Defenses 4.4 Senses and Reactions 4.5 Health 4.6 Speed and movement 4.7 Racial abilities 4.8 Class features 4.9 Feats 4.10 Skills and Languages 4.11 Powers 4.11.1 Powers Known 4.12 Equipment 5 Judge Comments 5.1 Level 1 5.1.1 Approval 1 5.1.2 Approval 2 5.2 Level 2 5.2.1 Approval 1 5.2.2 Approval 2 5.3 Level 3 5.3.1 Approval 1 5.3.2 Approval 2 5.4 Status

Summary

Alexander Duran	Player Atanatotatos
Human Fighter (Unaligned)	Level 3 (XP 2696)
Initiative +2
Passive Insight 13 Passive Perception 14; Senses normal
HP 47 Bloodied 23 Surge Value 11; Surges Per-Day 11
AC 20 Fortitude 18 Reflex 15 Will 14
Speed 5 Size medium
Str 18 (+4) Dex 12 (+1) Wis 15 (+2) Con 15 (+2) Int 10 (+0) Cha 8 (-1)
Racial Abilities Bonus At-Will Power, Bonus feat, Bonus Skill, Human defense bonuses
Class Features Combat challenge, Combat superiority, Fighter weapon talent(one-handed)
Basic Attack Waraxe +10 vs AC, 1d12+6 dmg
Ranged Basic Attack Dagger rng 5/10 +6 vs AC, 1d4+2 dmg
Feats Toughness, Weapon proficiency(Waraxe), Shield push
Skills Athletics +8, Endurance +6, Heal +8, Perception +4, Streetwise +5(+8 in Bacarte)
Languages Allarian, Imperial
Powers

Tide of Iron (At Will Standard Melee ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +10 vs. AC

Hit: 1d12+6 damage and push 1 square

Cleave (At Will Standard Melee ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +10 vs AC

Hit: 1d12+6 dmg and 4 dmg to adjacent enemy

Brash strike (At Will Standard Melee ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +12 vs AC

Hit: 1d12+8 dmg

Effect: grant CA to target till start of next turn

Special: when wielding an axe, hammer or mace, add Con mod to dmg

Pass forward (At Will Move Personal ✦ Martial)

Effect: pick an enemy; if you end your movement adjacent to it, you don't provoke Opportunity Attacks from it with your movement

Covering Attack (Encounter Standard Melee ✦ Weapon, martial)

Target: one creature

Attack: +10 vs AC

Hit: 2d12+6, ally adjacent to target can shift 2 squares

Sweeping blow (Encounter Standard Close burst 1 ✦ Martial, Weapon)

Target: Each enemy visible in burst

Attack: +12 vs. AC

Hit: 1d12+6 damage

Special: when wielding an axe, flail, heavy blade or pick add 1/2 Str mod to attack roll

Comeback strike (Daily Standard Melee ✦ Martial, Healing, Reliable, Weapon)

Target: One creature

Attack: +10 vs AC

Hit: 2d12+6 dmg and spend a healing surge

Fluff

Description:Alexander is nearly 2m tall, with a very large frame and a muscled, though lean, build. He's got messy, mid-length dark hair, a full beard and brown eyes. He bears a deep four-clawed scar through the whole of his back. He travels with simple clothes and his scale armor, on his back an old longsword and a heavy shield, also marked by claws. His demeanor is generally quiet and almost timid, except in battle.

Background:Alexander was born in Bacarte from the marriage between a deserter of the Imperial army and a local woman. He barely remembers his father's place, as he and his mother were abandoned when he was still very young. Shortly after, they were reached by Alexander's grandfather, a retired Imperial commander, happy to find his only family left after years of search. While, his mother died when he was a kid, Alexander never lacked an education or parental love, quite the opposite. Despite growing in the mess of Bacarte, hardly a good place to grow up a honest man, Alexander received the best education he could hope for. His grandfather trained him as an elite soldier, he taught him to read -two languages- and to honor the gods -those of the Imperium. To this day, 21 years old, Alexander never fails to train daily; despite his appearance of a gruff warrior, he doesn't dislike a good read -poetry, most of all- and never forgets to offer a prayer to the gods to ask for their favor, be it Poseeydus before a journey, or Palladys before a battle. When his beloved grandfather could hardly get up from bed because of illness and old age, he started working as a bodyguard and a mercenary as a late teen. He offered services even on ships for brief journeys, and, when he managed to survive an owlbear's attack on his own -of which he bears the signs on his back- he decided to keep the claw-marked shield that saved his life and make it a sort of symbol. Recently, his grandfather passed away, and Alexander decided he wants to see the world and discover in person the things he read in his mentor's books. He has also decided he wants to search for his father. Despite being obviously hardened by the Bacartian environment -he's a fury in battle, and his claw-mark is well known and respected- Alexander is a kind soul, untalkative and ultimately shy.

Hooks:Alexander wants to see the world, especially the Imperium his grandfather idolized and told him about since he was small. Butmost of all, he wants to find his father and find out why he deserted the army, and then abandoned his family too.

Kicker:After his grandfather died, Alexander left Bacarte, was hired as a guard on a ship, and ended up in Daunton. Now he wants to see the amazing side of the world and also look for his father, Anostos Duran, of whom he owns a small portrait and a faint memory. Time to look for a crowded tavern...

Math

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Ability Scores

Attributes
Ability	Cost	Initial	Racial	Level	Final	Mod
Str	9	16	+2	0	18	4
Con	7	15	0	0	15	2
Dex	2	12	0	0	12	1
Int	0	10	0	0	10	0
Wis	7	15	0	0	15	2
Cha	0	8	0	0	8	-1
Totals	25					8

Attacks

Basic Attacks

Attack Type

Attrib

Attrib Type

Class

Class Feature

Feat

Feat Name

Equip

Equip Name

Misc

Misc Name

Level

Total

vs?

Basic Melee

4

str

1

Weapon Talent

4

Waraxe +2

1

10

AC

Basic Ranged

1

dex

3

Dagger

1

5

AC

Defenses

Defenses

Defense

Attrib

Attrib Type

Class

Racial

Feat

Feat Name

Equip

Equip Name

Misc

Misc Name

Level

Total

Armor Class

+1/+0

dex/int

9

Scale Mail, Heavy Shield

1

21

Fortitude

+4/+2

str/con

2

1

1

18

Reflex

+1/+0

dex/int

1

2

Heavy Shield

1

15

Will

+2/-1

wis/cha

1

1

14

Saving Throw Bonuses

Senses and Reactions

Senses and Reactions
Sense/Reaction	Attrib mod	Class	Class Feature	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Level	Other/Trained	Total
Initiative	1			0	0	0	0	0	1	0	2
Passive Insight	2	0	0	0	0	0	0	0	1	0	13
Passive Perception	2	0	0	0	1	Bacarte Region	0	0	1		14

Health

Health
--	Base Class	Con	Per Level	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Other	Total	Blooded	Surge
Hit Points	15	15	6	0	5	Toughness	0			47	23	11

Surges per Day 11 (Class 9 + Con 2)

Speed and movement

Speed: 5 (6 without armor)

Racial abilities

• +2 to any stat
• Speed 6
• Languages: common, choice
• Bonus At-Will Attack
• Bonus trained skill from class list
• Bonus feat
• +1 to Ref, Will an Fort defenses

Class features

• Combat Challenge
• Combat Superiority
• Weapon Talent (one-handed)

Feats

• Toughness
• Shield Push
• Weapon Proficiency:Waraxe

Skills and Languages

Languages: Common, Elven (from race)
Trained skills: Athletics, Endurance, Heal, Streetwise (*)
(*) From Human Bonus skill feature

Skills
Skill	Trained	Attrib	Attrib Type	Racial	Feat	Feat Name	Equip	Equip Name	Level	Total
Acrobatics		1	dex				-2	Heavy shield	1	0
Arcana		0	int						1	1
Athletics	5	4	str				-2	Heavy shield	1	8
Bluff		-1	cha						1	0
Diplomacy		-1	cha						1	0
Dungeoneering		2	wis						1	3
Endurance	5	2	con				-2	Heavy shield	1	6
Heal	5	2	wis						1	8
History		0	int						1	1
Insight		2	wis						1	3
Intimidate		-1	cha						1	0
Nature		2	wis						1	3
Perception		2	wis		1	Bacarte region			1	4
Religion		0	int						1	1
Stealth		1	dex				-2	Heavy shield	1	0
Streetwise	5	-1	cha						1	5
Thievery		1	dex				-2	Heavy shield	1	0

Powers

Powers Known

• From Level 1:
  • At Will: Brash strike
  • At Will: Cleave
  • At Will: Tide of iron
  • Encounter: Covering attack
  • Daily: Comeback strik
• From level 2:
  • Utility: Pass forward
• From level 3:
  • Encounter: Sweeping blow

Equipment

Item	Cost	Weight	Notes
Scale Armor	45 gp	45 lb	purchased at start
Heavy shield	5 g	6 lb	purchased at start
longsword	15 g	4 lb	purchased at start
dagger	1 gp	1 lb	purchased at start
Floating Heavy Shield	360 gp	6 lb	Adventure reward
Waraxe +2	1,800 gp	10 lb	Adventure Reward
Adventurer's kit	15 gp	33 lb	purchased at start. Contains backpack, bedroll, flint and steel, belt pouch, 10 days trail rations, 50ft hemp rope, 2 sunrods, waterskin. Items used are crossed out.
gold	545gp 2sp 5cp	0.5 lb	Starting gold and Adventure reward

Total weight: 105,5 lb
Carrying capacity: normal load up to 180 lb. Heavy load up to 360 lb.

Reference link for XP:[1] Reference link for XP and treasure 2: [2]

Judge Comments

Level 1

Approval 1

Approval from --Graf 02:57, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Attributes cost/bonuses ok, batt ok, def ok, saves ok, senses & skills OK, health ok, powers ok, encumbrance/gold spent ok

Comment: While your powers math is so simple I don't think it's necessary now if it starts to get complex when you go up in level please consider adding the powers to-hit template. Also, spell-checked your backstory and "fixed" the spelling of Poseeydus to match the one on the gods page (unless it's supposed to be your way, then I'll fix the wiki).

Aside: Your father must have a fascinating story, to have managed to travel from the Imperium before the portal was opened. I wonder what happened to him...

Approval 2

Approved by Halford

Notes

1.) A fixed a few minor issues with powers, things like inconsistent capitalization. Added an to cleave to make it clear its only one adjacent enemy, probably not strictly needed, but meh.

2.) Corrected a few minor spelling errors in fluff.

Suggestion

1.) He doesn't dislike a good read is a little cumbersome, I had to reread it, not a big deal I'm just a pedant.

Level 2

Approval 1

comments from covaithe

• Your passive perception should be 19, not 14. It's right in the math section, though we usually put the regional benefit as a feat instead of the other column.
• The HP section in the math still has you at 34 total. 41 is right. You might want to consider replacing some of these with the templated versions; they're much nicer.

Only minor errors, and none of them in your favor, so I approve Alex for level 2

Approval 2

Comments from Ozymandias79

• you could add that tide of iron requires that you are armed with a shield but if covaithe don't bothers with it neither will I

I hereby approve Alexander for level 2

Level 3

Approval 1

Comments from TwoHeadsBarking:

• Your dagger should only be doing 1d4+1 for a ranged basic attack.

Besides that everything looks good. Approved.

Approval 2

Comments from Ozymandias79

• Approved, 'Nuff Said!

Status

Status: Approved as 3rd level character with 2696 xp by TwoHeadsBarking and Ozymandias79