You need to specify what Ultimate Effort applies to. Same thing for Regen - it's bought per type of damage condition.
If Jemal had a problem with Accurate on Arrays, then I'd guess that Imp Crit in array would be even more problematic.
Some of your powers still lack ranks.
While it probably doesn't make a difference with the free points we have, comments on character creation from Jemal indicated that attack bonus substitute feats like Attack Focus come out the feat section, not the combat section - those points were supposed to encourage people to buy raw base attack/defense instead of using the cheaper feats.
Dex mod should be +3, not +2. Your skills and saves use the correct modifier.
It sort of seems weird for someone learning to control her powers and who mentions a lack of control, inherent non-user friendliness, and apparently little interest in leanring about them to have 13 rather distinct APs, some of which require exacting precision.
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Jack, we have PL 11/180 points. Based on the other characters we've run into, I'd say we're about still PL 8 comparatively though.
Your defensive roll is listed as 6 under your toughness section, and 4 in your feats.
It might be useful to note the total points your array covers in addition to the total cost of the array/APs.
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Oops. I figured that our QB wouldn't have been posting full round action if he'd been stunned. Inspire can be stupidly awesome, especially when buffing multiple people. It's really expensive for the person using it though. But yeah, her attack was correct - there was a reason her defense was a whole 11.
Not allowed to have weapons? Temper was planning on making or otherwise aquiring weapons as soon as she had time. Not like she's all that bothered by rules, however, especially since her power already puts conventional personal weapons to shame.
Hmm, XP...
Fully realizing an increase in PL would take those 5 points (and then some). On the other hand, I could throw a lot of points into skills too.
I assumed that our caps would increase to those of PL 12, but we're not getting 15 extra points since there's no automatic link between PL and power points.