Hello, Enworld!

I've begun writing a fantasy novel, and I'm going to be posting it chapter by chapter on my personal blog as I get it written. If anyone is interested in reading it, I am looking for feedback- good or bad. So if you feel like giving it a read, here you go!

Last of the King's Men

If anyone would like to give feedback, I'm looking for as much as I can get. (Again- good or bad.) All I ask is that you be as specific as possible. I'd rather receive ten specific negative comments than one "It was pretty good". Be brutally honest if necessary.

Thanks in advance, and enjoy!