Stat this up # 2

[Cleon]

Flyby Attack makes too much sense.

All three of us are agreeing? The End Times are upon us!

Updating the Foxdragon Working Draft.

 

[Nookie]

flavor time?

 

[Cleon]

flavor time?

Appears that way.

 

[Nookie]

This mischievous fox-like dragons eyes flash with cunning intelect as it's tale flares brightly for a moment obscuring its features in a ripple of heat.

 

[freyar]

That's fine with me if we tidy up the grammar and spelling:

This mischievous fox-like dragon's eyes flash with cunning intellect as its tale flares brightly for a moment, obscuring its features in a ripple of heat.

 

[Cleon]

That's fine with me if we tidy up the grammar and spelling:

This mischievous fox-like dragon's eyes flash with cunning intellect as its tale flares brightly for a moment, obscuring its features in a ripple of heat.

That doesn't say much about what it actually looks like - nothing about its shape (long & stoat-like), whether it has wings (it doesn't).

The original picture shows they creature has a "mane" of long hair and antlers, both of which I think should be included in the description.

 

[freyar]

Why not add something to it, in that case?

 

[Cleon]

Why not add something to it, in that case?

Sorry, I must have left the window open. That subtle hint you released just escaped into the garden.

 

[Nookie]

Ok revamp

This long mischievous fox-like dragon has antlers and a mane of fiery red orange hair, Its eyes flash with cunning intellect as its magnificent flowing tale flares brightly for a moment, obscuring its features in a ripple of heat.

 

[freyar]

Does that work better for you, Cleon?