You spend a lot of time talking about Traveller and how much you like it, but you don't really talk much about how or why N.E.W. has the potential to surpass Traveller. You mention a few things you like (a good basic mechanic, character creation, etc) but don't really explain why these are better. It would be very easy for someone reading to dismiss your commendations as being without merit as you offer no support for your argument. If this one aspect of N.E.W. is better than Traveller, tell us what the difference is and why the N.E.W. mechanic is superior. I agree with the point you're trying to make, I think WOIN is a well-built system, but without supporting arguments to substantiate your claims I don't think it would carry a lot of weight with people who are undecided or on the other side of the fence. If your primary motivation is just to put your opinion out there then by all means ignore me, but I think the internet as a whole needs more people who are willing to provide support for their arguments.
Also I approve of the pun that is the article title.