pukunui
Legend
So far, the only thing I can find to complain about is the book's numerous typographical errors and similar discrepancies. Like the mixing of past and present tense in the description of the second Sundering ("... the Chosen of Auril foments war ... and was defeated.") and the few lines of overly-large text on page 61 (starting with "harnessing the primal power ...").
The fact that, while Caer Callidyr is referred to as the capital of the Ffolk on the Moonshaes, it isn't marked on the map (whereas the ruins of their former capital, Caer Corwell, are) is a little irksome as well, and it's also a bit confusing when you see things like "Dornall Forest" in the text and "Dernal Forest" on the map. The Moonshaes are also misspelled as "Moonsheas" in the section on druids later in the book.
Aside from picayune quibbles like these, I really have no qualms with this book whatsoever.
The fact that, while Caer Callidyr is referred to as the capital of the Ffolk on the Moonshaes, it isn't marked on the map (whereas the ruins of their former capital, Caer Corwell, are) is a little irksome as well, and it's also a bit confusing when you see things like "Dornall Forest" in the text and "Dernal Forest" on the map. The Moonshaes are also misspelled as "Moonsheas" in the section on druids later in the book.
Aside from picayune quibbles like these, I really have no qualms with this book whatsoever.
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