Where would this go, or is it even appropriate?

[ConnorSB]

Hi! I'm a senior in High School and I'm taking a Creative Writing course. For my mid-term project, I had to write a complete story. I've edited it as best I can, its been group edited by my fellow students, and my teacher has edited it as well, but it still doesn't feel, well done.

I've been a board member for a while, and I am constantly impressed by the number of excelent writers on the board (and not just in the story hour forum). I really want thier feedback, and so I was wondering where exactly I should (and if I should) post my story.

One caveat: it brings up a religous question, but it isn't specifically supposed to be about religion, and if I did post it, I would try to keep the discussion moving towards "is this a good story and what could be better" rather than "do I like what this story is trying to say?"

Thanks for any responses (hopefully ones from mods, as ultimatly it is thier feelings on the issue that I will abide by).

Connor

 

[Morrus]

I think that Story Hour is a good place for any fiction. Most of the fiction there is in the form of campaign logs, but there's no reason why other stories couldn't be posted there.

 

[Altamont Ravenard]

If you were to put your story in Story Hour, I suggest you link it to your sig so more people know you want comments on it.

AR

 

[ConnorSB]

OK, i posted it here:

http://www.enworld.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1325382

Feel free to shut it down if it looks innapropriate, etc. Thanks!

Connor