Fiendish Elf Female [comments please]

kkoie

First Post

• May 11, 2002

• #11

I like the second and third drawings a lot. I have no problem with the muscular appearance. To be perfectly honest, my innitial reaction to the first drawing reminded me a lot of Michaelangelo's(sp?) work. Although his females looked the way they did for a differn't reason than yours I think. I understand not having models, before my wife the only model experience I got was in college.

K Koie

 

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Liquide

DEX: 4

• May 12, 2002

• #12

Human female walking

OK here comes another try, this one is not and elf though

 

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Liquide

DEX: 4

• May 13, 2002

• #13

Female Tiefling

Well here is my 5th try on the female body.

This time I give you the female tiefling Iyand'ra wearing a living demon armor.

What do you think?

 

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kkoie

First Post

• May 13, 2002

• #14

They both look really cool. I think you did a great job!

K Koie

 

Liquide

DEX: 4

• May 13, 2002

• #15

kkoie said:

They both look really cool. I think you did a great job!

K Koie

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Well I do like your comment mate, but why is it good is the follow-up , need to know what to improve and what to keep when I learn how to do women.

 

evileeyore

Mrrrph

• May 13, 2002

• #16

Why are they good. The face. You've succeed in capturing a more femine cast to the face.

 

Liquide

DEX: 4

• May 13, 2002

• #17

evileeyore said:

Why are they good. The face. You've succeed in capturing a more femine cast to the face.

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Thanks mate, most of my mates say that I have made all of these way to manly, the first one I can agree on but I think I have gotten the ang of it in the last 2.

 

Trevalon Moonleirion

Explorer

• May 13, 2002

• #18

Great job, man! These are very good pics, and I commend you for sticking with doing something you like (or at least I hope you like it!) Your first attempts DID look pretty manly, but as the pictures progressed, the faces softened up quite a bit. My only comment is the eyes. They eyes are a bit too pronounced...too darkly drawn... too... too prominent or big.. I'm not sure what it is exactly. But they don't seem to fit the rest of the face.

Other than my constructive criticism, MARVELOUS work--keep it up!!!!

 

reapersaurus

Explorer

• May 13, 2002

• #19

yes, they've been getting better in leaps and bounds.
Initially, the heads were huge and features too muscular.

The latest is quite feminine.

Work on the eyes, tho.
I think in general the eyes you're drawing are WAY too big for the feminine look.

 

Liquide

DEX: 4

• May 13, 2002

• #20

Catwoman

Here we have her, catwoman at least the way I want catwoman to look like .

This one is drawn from a character I saw in a Darkness comic though, my first non-freehand drawing of a female so far.

Hope you like her and please keep those comments and suggestions coming.

 

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