I need some help with making race of supernatural Outsider from a desert di dimension. The description is how they would look and also a description of an individual character I am working.
I know that they can assume a human form. I would like them to have hawk-like vision. They are ambidextrous with their bone blade. They can not wear any armor. If they are evil in alignment they are not fiends but instead just evil outsiders. Their bone-plates give them a natural armor of at least +6. They are twelve feet tall in height. They are intelligent supernatural outsiders that can live for at least two thousand years.
Would they work better if they are not genderless but instead have a two genders just like human?
I would any sugestions on making them sound original
Proteus is a humanoid without any gender that stands twelve feet tall. Its muscular body is covered in gnarled, bony plates that are the sand-colored. The head is attached to a long flexible neck. On the top of its head is a monstrous crown of horns. Growing out of the forehead is a pair of large, thick, monstrous segmented horns that curve backwards. The back corners of its skull have an enormous pair of backward-pointing spikes that are six inches long; these are surrounded by three smaller spikes. It has five eyes. Two eyes are set on short flexible eyestalks. The two eyestalks can bend to look up, down and backwards without moving its head. Three eyes are located in the center of its forehead. His eyes are solid luminous, sulfuric yellow orbs. It has two vertical slits for a nose. The shoulders have four large spikes on them. Rising from his back are three pairs of large, hooked bony protrusions that are sand-colored. These bony protrusions pointed downward. Its arms end in massive three feet long serrated blades of bone. Growing out of both elbows is a backwards curving thorny bony protrusion. The sixteen feet long semi-prehensile tail is thick and long, tapering to a thin whip and a point like that of an iguana's tail. The tail, which ends in six sharp spikes, is covered in bony plates that are sand-colored. Its leg structure is in the manner of a goat's hind legs and they terminate in large feet with four clawed prehensile toes. Both of its knees have a large, thorny, bony protrusion that is sand-colored. A backwards curving thorny bony protrusion that is sand-colored protrudes from his heels.
I know that they can assume a human form. I would like them to have hawk-like vision. They are ambidextrous with their bone blade. They can not wear any armor. If they are evil in alignment they are not fiends but instead just evil outsiders. Their bone-plates give them a natural armor of at least +6. They are twelve feet tall in height. They are intelligent supernatural outsiders that can live for at least two thousand years.
Would they work better if they are not genderless but instead have a two genders just like human?
I would any sugestions on making them sound original
Proteus is a humanoid without any gender that stands twelve feet tall. Its muscular body is covered in gnarled, bony plates that are the sand-colored. The head is attached to a long flexible neck. On the top of its head is a monstrous crown of horns. Growing out of the forehead is a pair of large, thick, monstrous segmented horns that curve backwards. The back corners of its skull have an enormous pair of backward-pointing spikes that are six inches long; these are surrounded by three smaller spikes. It has five eyes. Two eyes are set on short flexible eyestalks. The two eyestalks can bend to look up, down and backwards without moving its head. Three eyes are located in the center of its forehead. His eyes are solid luminous, sulfuric yellow orbs. It has two vertical slits for a nose. The shoulders have four large spikes on them. Rising from his back are three pairs of large, hooked bony protrusions that are sand-colored. These bony protrusions pointed downward. Its arms end in massive three feet long serrated blades of bone. Growing out of both elbows is a backwards curving thorny bony protrusion. The sixteen feet long semi-prehensile tail is thick and long, tapering to a thin whip and a point like that of an iguana's tail. The tail, which ends in six sharp spikes, is covered in bony plates that are sand-colored. Its leg structure is in the manner of a goat's hind legs and they terminate in large feet with four clawed prehensile toes. Both of its knees have a large, thorny, bony protrusion that is sand-colored. A backwards curving thorny bony protrusion that is sand-colored protrudes from his heels.
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