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<blockquote data-quote="VLAD the Destroyer" data-source="post: 6959999" data-attributes="member: 6803188">So this is the beginning of my back store.&nbsp; Still have more to write just want to get feedback.Born in the City of Wands Salahuddin grew up under the tutelage of his father Hamid Al-Qadib.&nbsp; His father is an instructor at the University of the Sand and a competent Elementalist of the Covenant of Sand.&nbsp; Salahuddin was not a studious child.&nbsp; It was not that he was not smart or capable he just did not care for his fathers passion.&nbsp; This was a disappointment for Hamid who envisioned his son rise through the ranks of the University.&nbsp; As his father pushed him to grow up and meet his potential Salahuddin continued to shirk his studies.&nbsp; Instead he would explore the city and the catacombs beneath.It was in these catacombs that Salahuddin's life would forever change.&nbsp; In a dusty and forgotten passage he found a door.&nbsp; It was made of steel and ice formed the frame.&nbsp; Being a boy of only ten curiosity took over.&nbsp; Salahuddin opened the strange door.&nbsp; Blinding light shone through the door and without looking back he stepped through.&nbsp; He was hit by the cold and the wind.&nbsp; Unsure of where he was and unnerved by the wind he turned to head back and nearly stepped of a ledge into nothingness.&nbsp; The doorway was gone.&nbsp; He looked in disbelief for a minute and slowly backed away from the edge.&nbsp; Scared now he turned and began search for a way home.&nbsp; He searched futilely until he walked into a open air market filled with Djinn.&nbsp; Salahuddin opened his mouth in shock and promptly feinted.&nbsp; When he came too he was in a silk clad room.&nbsp; Sitting near the bed was a Genie valet.&nbsp; He smiled at Salahuddin and pointed to a tray with food and drink and then disappeared.&nbsp; Minutes later a Djinn walked in and smiled.&nbsp; She informed me that I was in the Citadel of Ice and Steel and was an honored guest of Great Caliph Husam al-Balil ben Nafhat al-Yugayyim.&nbsp; Salahuddin was told to dress and prepare himself for an audience.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="VLAD the Destroyer, post: 6959999, member: 6803188"] So this is the beginning of my back store. Still have more to write just want to get feedback. Born in the City of Wands Salahuddin grew up under the tutelage of his father Hamid Al-Qadib. His father is an instructor at the University of the Sand and a competent Elementalist of the Covenant of Sand. Salahuddin was not a studious child. It was not that he was not smart or capable he just did not care for his fathers passion. This was a disappointment for Hamid who envisioned his son rise through the ranks of the University. As his father pushed him to grow up and meet his potential Salahuddin continued to shirk his studies. Instead he would explore the city and the catacombs beneath. It was in these catacombs that Salahuddin's life would forever change. In a dusty and forgotten passage he found a door. It was made of steel and ice formed the frame. Being a boy of only ten curiosity took over. Salahuddin opened the strange door. Blinding light shone through the door and without looking back he stepped through. He was hit by the cold and the wind. Unsure of where he was and unnerved by the wind he turned to head back and nearly stepped of a ledge into nothingness. The doorway was gone. He looked in disbelief for a minute and slowly backed away from the edge. Scared now he turned and began search for a way home. He searched futilely until he walked into a open air market filled with Djinn. Salahuddin opened his mouth in shock and promptly feinted. When he came too he was in a silk clad room. Sitting near the bed was a Genie valet. He smiled at Salahuddin and pointed to a tray with food and drink and then disappeared. Minutes later a Djinn walked in and smiled. She informed me that I was in the Citadel of Ice and Steel and was an honored guest of Great Caliph Husam al-Balil ben Nafhat al-Yugayyim. Salahuddin was told to dress and prepare himself for an audience. [/QUOTE]

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