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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Quickleaf" data-source="post: 6429024" data-attributes="member: 20323">[MENTION=51930]fireinthedust[/MENTION] I am fine with character mechanics being hammered out, but not major character story elements like you've been changing with Hawken.Your sheet reads better on my iPad now! Whatever changes you made definitely have improved it. Where are his feats though? I don't see them anywhere, and you have him as a variant human...is he human or mer? As a Hermit, his background feature is "Discovery"...did you have an idea for what that might be? Or did you want to switch it to another? As Ship's Surgeon he needs proficiency in surgeon's tools (since he doesn't have healing magic).I notice 3 important things conspicuously absent from your character sheet: (1) Bond (VERY IMPORTANT), Flaw, Ideal, and Personality Trait(s) (in 5th edition these are described under Backgrounds in the PHB, whereas Bonds are unique to this campaign and some examples are found in my first post).(2) A written character background. It doesn't have to be much, but at least a paragraph to help me understand your character.(3) Fortunes (if any, as described in my original post).Also, his weapon is not a "kitana" (which it is listed as in your sheet). I thought we went over this? If he was a Jesuit to China it would be a "dao" (a re-skinned scimitar or longsword).[SBLOCK=Picture of a Chinese Dao]<img src="http://p2.la-img.com/1211/26607/10020420_1_l.jpg" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " data-size="" style="" />[/SBLOCK]So, get those done, and converse with         [MENTION=6777934]Maldavos[/MENTION] about the issue of Ship's Surgeon, and then I will give you the green light. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />EDIT: Oh! Looks like Maldavos is good with you being Ship's Surgeon. That part is resolved. Just address my three bullet points above then!EDIT: Also, it looks like you misread the Warlock level progression chart and gave him 3 Eldritch Invocations (Armor of Shadows, Fiendish Vigor, and Agonizing Blast). At least, you list Armor of Shadows in the armor section of the sheet. At 4th level he gets 2 Eldritch Invocations, however, not 3.</blockquote>

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