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Message: <blockquote data-quote="KarinsDad" data-source="post: 6126802" data-attributes="member: 2011">Clear as mud.Could you make that more visible? Bold it, make it a different color? Something?A friend of mine was an editor and he always said that if you write something that looks like a paragraph, it's harder to read. If you write it like a table or chart, people can visualize it much faster. Sorry, but your stat block just looks a bit like a rambling paragraph, mostly because you wrote what every power does. It makes the stat block look real busy and large. You don't need that extra power info in your stat block, you just need to add the extra info in your actions block when you use the power.However you can clean it up a bit would be appreciated. <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/laugh.png"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing    :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" />Sorry, but I do not have time to read 8 page character sheets for 5 PCs every round to find out every little nuance of PCs. If something is happening, you HAVE to write it down in your post.Thanks.</blockquote>