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<blockquote data-quote="emoplato" data-source="post: 6050632" data-attributes="member: 97812">If Lawful Evil is your goal than the story should reflect the reason why she turned her back on chaos. A demon typically won't go straight to the devils unless they are trying to mess with them. I would say before she met the love of her life she saw little point in facilitating the cycle of destruction and manipulation just for delighting in another's misery. She did as she was instructed but met a rather peaceful hermit. Despite him catching her in the act all he did was explain his disapproval. This of course resonates with what already she was struggling with. She then follows this man abandoning her place among the Tanari under false pretenses. He, being a sort of naturalist, explains the systems and structures he sees in the world. She falls in love with him and the place he is trying to create, but a large group of skilled thieves and thugs on the run kill him and raid his home for supplies. Then to cover their tracks and ward off their pursuers set the forest ablaze. She therefore learns to despise such selfishness and vows to bring the wrath of order to bring about such structure.I don't care whether you go with the tree-hugging angle or not. It just made more sense for the guy to be a naturalist hermit as you only have to worry about him and not others accepting her, possibly making a case against law/tradition. I also know I didn't really provide whether he loved her as I was focusing on her revoking chaos. Of course feel free to construct more of an intimate relationship.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="emoplato, post: 6050632, member: 97812"] If Lawful Evil is your goal than the story should reflect the reason why she turned her back on chaos. A demon typically won't go straight to the devils unless they are trying to mess with them. I would say before she met the love of her life she saw little point in facilitating the cycle of destruction and manipulation just for delighting in another's misery. She did as she was instructed but met a rather peaceful hermit. Despite him catching her in the act all he did was explain his disapproval. This of course resonates with what already she was struggling with. She then follows this man abandoning her place among the Tanari under false pretenses. He, being a sort of naturalist, explains the systems and structures he sees in the world. She falls in love with him and the place he is trying to create, but a large group of skilled thieves and thugs on the run kill him and raid his home for supplies. Then to cover their tracks and ward off their pursuers set the forest ablaze. She therefore learns to despise such selfishness and vows to bring the wrath of order to bring about such structure. I don't care whether you go with the tree-hugging angle or not. It just made more sense for the guy to be a naturalist hermit as you only have to worry about him and not others accepting her, possibly making a case against law/tradition. I also know I didn't really provide whether he loved her as I was focusing on her revoking chaos. Of course feel free to construct more of an intimate relationship. [/QUOTE]

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