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<blockquote data-quote="Faolyn" data-source="post: 8296441" data-attributes="member: 6915329"><p>And some more!</p><p></p><p>Please, bleed on this one. Not everything reads as necessarily well-balanced (I used that old Detect Balance spreadsheet) but I can't quite tell if it's imbalanced in a bad way. I'm not married to the name, either.</p><p></p><p>[SPOILER]</p><p>[ATTACH=full]137939[/ATTACH]</p><p>[ATTACH=full]137940[/ATTACH]</p><p>[ATTACH=full]137941[/ATTACH]</p><p>[/SPOILER]</p><p></p><p>Finally, I'd appreciate the input of a non-cisgendered person, specifically for the following paragraph (which is second to the last of the description part). </p><p></p><p><em>All fashioned are sexless and most are created without anything that hints as to a physical sex (and even those that are made with such accoutrements are completely incapable of taking any sort of role in biological reproduction). While nearly all fashioned are assigned a gender by their creator—if only because their creator decides to use a particular set of pronouns with that individual—not every fashioned decides to continue using that assigned gender, and many prefer to have no gender at all.</em></p><p></p><p>Since the fashioned aren't biological organisms, gender identity works differently for them then it does for humanoids, and I wanted to make sure I wrote it in a way that doesn't sound bad.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Faolyn, post: 8296441, member: 6915329"] And some more! Please, bleed on this one. Not everything reads as necessarily well-balanced (I used that old Detect Balance spreadsheet) but I can't quite tell if it's imbalanced in a bad way. I'm not married to the name, either. [SPOILER] [ATTACH type="full"]137939[/ATTACH] [ATTACH type="full"]137940[/ATTACH] [ATTACH type="full"]137941[/ATTACH] [/SPOILER] Finally, I'd appreciate the input of a non-cisgendered person, specifically for the following paragraph (which is second to the last of the description part). [I]All fashioned are sexless and most are created without anything that hints as to a physical sex (and even those that are made with such accoutrements are completely incapable of taking any sort of role in biological reproduction). While nearly all fashioned are assigned a gender by their creator—if only because their creator decides to use a particular set of pronouns with that individual—not every fashioned decides to continue using that assigned gender, and many prefer to have no gender at all.[/I] Since the fashioned aren't biological organisms, gender identity works differently for them then it does for humanoids, and I wanted to make sure I wrote it in a way that doesn't sound bad. [/QUOTE]
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