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<blockquote data-quote="FitzTheRuke" data-source="post: 9361596" data-attributes="member: 59816">Another editorial dump. I hope my formatting makes sense and you don't have to spend too long looking for what I'm talking about:Under Lolth: Naxa: &quot;Naxa is, unbeknownst to her sister, and agent of Lolth.&quot; (an agent).Under Lord Soth: &quot;He was curesed to live...&quot; (He was cursed). Lair Actions: Reaping Fear. &quot;DC 15 Wisdom Savint Throw...&quot; (Saving Throw, though you don't always capitalize it).Under Miska: Impending Doom. &quot;When Miska initiaqlly&quot; (initially)Under Strahd Strahd in: Eve of Ruin: &quot;...could be to much for your group.&quot; (too much)Under Tiamat: &quot;Avernus, the firt layer of the Nine Hells&quot; (first)Tiamat in: Eve of Ruin: &quot;she is likely to offer some form of help on their qeust.&quot; (quest)Avatar of Vengeance: &quot;Tiamat might suggest she send her avatar to provdie...&quot; (provide)Deus Ex Machina: &quot;...final battle and the untied forces...&quot; (united)Remaking the First World: &quot;... the Cave of Shattered Relection...&quot; (Reflection)Under Vashishax: Vashishax's Lair: &quot;Attuned with the turblent energies...&quot; (turbulent)Under Vecna: &quot;From humbel beginnings...&quot; (humble)Vecna in: Eve of Ruin: &quot;This is to difficult a challenge...&quot; (too)Lair Actions: Terrifying Secrets: &quot;Vecna cast, at 9th level...&quot; (casts)In the Appendix: &quot;Additionly, for those who want it...&quot; (Additionally)The paragraph after (requires attunement): &quot;... the agent of Chaos, adn imprison...&quot; (and)Later in that paragraph: &quot;the Rod of Lawr&quot; (Law)On the back cover: &quot;Is your Kas looking or Miska in all the wrong places...&quot; (for)&quot;Is you Lolth nowhere to be seen.&quot; (question mark?)&quot;For use with the 5th edition of the world most popular...&quot; (World's)I haven't had the chance to put my Editor's Eye to the statblocks yet (I've only looked at them as a fan of your work) but I DID notice that in Vecna's &quot;God of Undeath&quot; ability there is a floating aphostraphe in the word &quot;his&quot;.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="FitzTheRuke, post: 9361596, member: 59816"] Another editorial dump. I hope my formatting makes sense and you don't have to spend too long looking for what I'm talking about: Under Lolth: Naxa: "Naxa is, unbeknownst to her sister, and agent of Lolth." (an agent). Under Lord Soth: "He was curesed to live..." (He was cursed). Lair Actions: Reaping Fear. "DC 15 Wisdom Savint Throw..." (Saving Throw, though you don't always capitalize it). Under Miska: Impending Doom. "When Miska initiaqlly" (initially) Under Strahd Strahd in: Eve of Ruin: "...could be to much for your group." (too much) Under Tiamat: "Avernus, the firt layer of the Nine Hells" (first) Tiamat in: Eve of Ruin: "she is likely to offer some form of help on their qeust." (quest) Avatar of Vengeance: "Tiamat might suggest she send her avatar to provdie..." (provide) Deus Ex Machina: "...final battle and the untied forces..." (united) Remaking the First World: "... the Cave of Shattered Relection..." (Reflection) Under Vashishax: Vashishax's Lair: "Attuned with the turblent energies..." (turbulent) Under Vecna: "From humbel beginnings..." (humble) Vecna in: Eve of Ruin: "This is to difficult a challenge..." (too) Lair Actions: Terrifying Secrets: "Vecna cast, at 9th level..." (casts) In the Appendix: "Additionly, for those who want it..." (Additionally) The paragraph after (requires attunement): "... the agent of Chaos, adn imprison..." (and) Later in that paragraph: "the Rod of Lawr" (Law) On the back cover: "Is your Kas looking or Miska in all the wrong places..." (for) "Is you Lolth nowhere to be seen." (question mark?) "For use with the 5th edition of the world most popular..." (World's) I haven't had the chance to put my Editor's Eye to the statblocks yet (I've only looked at them as a fan of your work) but I DID notice that in Vecna's "God of Undeath" ability there is a floating aphostraphe in the word "his". [/QUOTE]

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