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<blockquote data-quote="Quickleaf" data-source="post: 5881483" data-attributes="member: 20323"><p>Well I just got a rejection letter from Greg on my planescape adventure because my idea came across as too much of a linear artifact hunt.</p><p></p><p>[sblock=my pitch]IN FETTERED LIES</p><p>DUNGEON - PLANESCAPE ADVENTURE, 11th-13th level (7,500 words)</p><p></p><p>Sigil's Canal of Curses. The eternally bleak winter realm of Niflheim.</p><p>Dis, the Iron City of Baator. Three planar locations with ties thicker</p><p>than blood, the River Styx, and the Book of Lies. Filled with nothing but</p><p>lies told by every being in the multiverse, the Book of Lies was once</p><p>kept by the Dustmen, but recently was stolen by a thief who delivered it</p><p>into the hands of Dispater. Whether the PCs represent the traditional</p><p>Dustmen keepers, a certain angel with a dirty halo, or their own</p><p>interests, they aim to steal the Book of Lies from under Dispater's</p><p>burning eye. As they follow the Styx from Sigil to the Gray Waste and</p><p>ultimately to Baator, the PCs are guided by an ingratiating marraenoloth</p><p>who probably intends to betray them, deal with the damned soul of the</p><p>thief sold out by her employer, and navigate a (literal and metaphorical)</p><p>maze of intrigue and deadly traps within Dis. Once the PCs pull off this</p><p>planar heist, they're faced with the dilemma of how to use the Book of</p><p>Lies. Will they find the wisdom to use the Book's terrible knowledge to</p><p>their advantage? Or will they become bound to the Book of Lies like other</p><p>souls before them?[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>Unusual critique, but there it is. Learn from my folly <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Quickleaf, post: 5881483, member: 20323"] Well I just got a rejection letter from Greg on my planescape adventure because my idea came across as too much of a linear artifact hunt. [sblock=my pitch]IN FETTERED LIES DUNGEON - PLANESCAPE ADVENTURE, 11th-13th level (7,500 words) Sigil's Canal of Curses. The eternally bleak winter realm of Niflheim. Dis, the Iron City of Baator. Three planar locations with ties thicker than blood, the River Styx, and the Book of Lies. Filled with nothing but lies told by every being in the multiverse, the Book of Lies was once kept by the Dustmen, but recently was stolen by a thief who delivered it into the hands of Dispater. Whether the PCs represent the traditional Dustmen keepers, a certain angel with a dirty halo, or their own interests, they aim to steal the Book of Lies from under Dispater's burning eye. As they follow the Styx from Sigil to the Gray Waste and ultimately to Baator, the PCs are guided by an ingratiating marraenoloth who probably intends to betray them, deal with the damned soul of the thief sold out by her employer, and navigate a (literal and metaphorical) maze of intrigue and deadly traps within Dis. Once the PCs pull off this planar heist, they're faced with the dilemma of how to use the Book of Lies. Will they find the wisdom to use the Book's terrible knowledge to their advantage? Or will they become bound to the Book of Lies like other souls before them?[/sblock] Unusual critique, but there it is. Learn from my folly ;) [/QUOTE]
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