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<blockquote data-quote="megamania" data-source="post: 1743613" data-attributes="member: 9255">Since I didn't know about this until the 18th, I tried but failed to get it on paper.&nbsp; I did do my 1 page story overview.&nbsp; This is the basic concept-A team of House Tharashk finders with a growing rep for being loose cannons are trying to stop the production of a new weapon during the war.&nbsp; The leader of the group is captured and tortured.&nbsp; The leader of the bad guys seems to know a lot about him and taunts him about his childhood and heritage.&nbsp; He suggests his father is not really a wealthy merchant from Passage but won't say whom it really is.At this point the team has tracked them down and charges in causing the bad guy to run for it.Thus begins a grand chase from central Khovaire into Northern forest area near the demon wastes using a new means of transportation- the air ship.&nbsp; Many attempts on their lives take place and eventually the ship is crashed within the forest.&nbsp; During this time, The leader and central figure is having dreams and odd sensations.&nbsp; Later, the sensations are revealed to be a Dragonmark forming.Oddly enough, the bad guy is having similiar issues.They arrive at the base and battle but once more the bad guy escapes but with the finished weapon.&nbsp; He is heading to Cyre.A new chase and now the hero is thinking this guy has a special connection with him.It ends with the bad guy entering Cyre as it goes boom and the heroes are just outside the zone.&nbsp; The hero is convinced the bad guy is a brother or the such.Follow up-REAL dad was a dragon marked Cannith member.&nbsp; Each 1/2 brother has developed their talents at the same time and yes-&nbsp; the brother is alive and NOT undead.&nbsp; And NO, the weapon was not what created the Mournelands.The war has made it that he can not find out what his special connection is.&nbsp; If a second book was okayed-&nbsp; it would be post war time and the brother is back.Not sure if I could fit it within a 310 page book but I'ld try. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)"&nbsp; data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" /> I have some ideas of doing it as a Story Hour or something else special-&nbsp; time will see....</blockquote>

[QUOTE="megamania, post: 1743613, member: 9255"] Since I didn't know about this until the 18th, I tried but failed to get it on paper. I did do my 1 page story overview. This is the basic concept- A team of House Tharashk finders with a growing rep for being loose cannons are trying to stop the production of a new weapon during the war. The leader of the group is captured and tortured. The leader of the bad guys seems to know a lot about him and taunts him about his childhood and heritage. He suggests his father is not really a wealthy merchant from Passage but won't say whom it really is. At this point the team has tracked them down and charges in causing the bad guy to run for it. Thus begins a grand chase from central Khovaire into Northern forest area near the demon wastes using a new means of transportation- the air ship. Many attempts on their lives take place and eventually the ship is crashed within the forest. During this time, The leader and central figure is having dreams and odd sensations. Later, the sensations are revealed to be a Dragonmark forming. Oddly enough, the bad guy is having similiar issues. They arrive at the base and battle but once more the bad guy escapes but with the finished weapon. He is heading to Cyre. A new chase and now the hero is thinking this guy has a special connection with him. It ends with the bad guy entering Cyre as it goes boom and the heroes are just outside the zone. The hero is convinced the bad guy is a brother or the such. Follow up- REAL dad was a dragon marked Cannith member. Each 1/2 brother has developed their talents at the same time and yes- the brother is alive and NOT undead. And NO, the weapon was not what created the Mournelands. The war has made it that he can not find out what his special connection is. If a second book was okayed- it would be post war time and the brother is back. Not sure if I could fit it within a 310 page book but I'ld try. ;) I have some ideas of doing it as a Story Hour or something else special- time will see.... [/QUOTE]

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