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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Nonlethal Force" data-source="post: 3217207" data-attributes="member: 35788">Not One Of The Updates!Well, as you can see, this Story Hour has drawn to a completion.  I hope you enjoyed the read.  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> This doesn't mean it is the end of the adventures of Rhema, Charis, Ischarus, and Semeion.  It does mean that they have reached a natural stopping point in the storyline.  Obviously there are a few cliffhangers intentionally left for readers to answer for themselves.  Such as:What happens to Tierna's children?Do the red Drakontai become fully integrated into the gold Drakontai?What happens to the ghostly figure's parents?What of the goblin tribe left in Quehalost ... or the druid for that matter?Perhaps more to the point, what of the land that is now left vacant?Ahhh.... it feels good to intentionally leave so many questions and loose ends for the readers to enjoy for themselves!  Any I forgot?  [I'm sure there are, so tell me! <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> ]I will be editing and revising the story over time ... simple things like going back and correcting the story, adding foreshadowing here and there, etc.  You can follow the editing tags at the bottom of each post to see what has been done and where the editing is happening if that kind of thing interests you.  But, onto more serious things.  I have a few questions for any readers who would like to respond.First, were the Drakontai believable as a concept race?  Furthermore, were you drawn into their beliefs about life (both when they were fervent in the protection of their beliefs and then when they were in the process of switching over)?Second, I am planning on doing another Story Hour since the number of reads indicates that this was reasonably popular (by my standards at least).  Would you like to hear more about these four adventurers or would you rather read more about some other adventurers?  [If other, another of my homebrew races or normal fantasy standard races?]I suppose those are the two pressing questions.  Overall comments accepted, by all means!Oh, and I should say.  If I do start another Story Hour with these four adventurers, you can believe I am going to post the link at the beginning and current end (wherever that is) of this thread.Once again, thanks for reading!</blockquote>

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