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Message: <blockquote data-quote="engrishonly" data-source="post: 5423176" data-attributes="member: 38460">I'll have to look up the trait. It could just be as a funky character trait temporarily until we get time for a vote. As I recall, there were some penalties involved with being one-eyed... can't remember any benefits. I'll check it out, anyway.Also, I don't know if people without the Character Burner are allowed access to online burning sites... Hopefully I can be clear enough to get it all wrapped up for our Paladin comrade.Anyway, onto the scathing criticism! <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />Belief 1... I'm not sure about this. The first half is cool, as is the second half, but they kind of don't fit well enough for my tastes. I liked the idea that Ferrantos was going to the Caves of Chaos to find something. Why not name it here? A general search for materials is harder for me to work with (it could be anything & it could be nothing). Name the thing, and as we go along, figure out "Is this the thing I seek?" I can discuss it with you further if you want ideas for the thing. And I think the relationship with Vellekhyr is better in a separate slot.Belief 2... I'm not sure I like this one at this time. It's occupying a slot & it doesn't quite fit since there's no blade at the moment, so it's kind of general & might not help. Keep this idea in your back pocket when the blade is closer to becoming reality.Belief 3... I wish it said more about Ferrantos. I wish it were more of an ethical/philosophical statement with actions/goals tied to it. At this point, it's closer to Instinct than Belief, IMO.Anyway, that's my Belief feedback. I get kinda picky with these because it's how you tell me what you want. I'm always asking for more!Instinct 1 is solid & will serve us well.Instinct 2 is okay... I'm just not sold on antecedents as a general concept right now.Instinct 3 seems like the typical skill-based instinct, so no real comment from me.You don't have the typical "awkward social situation" Insinct, like "Never let them forget I am Noble born".If you're okay with these, then cool.Otherwise, 1 & 3 are cool. The one to think about is the antecedents thing. I think the whole line of the antecedents story needs tightening, IMO. It will work, but I wish it were more specific.Alrighty. We'll see how the others generate their Relationships.I'd like someone to have a major NPC that I can throw into the situation, but it's not important that anyone do so.</blockquote>

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