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<blockquote data-quote="Richard Brookes" data-source="post: 7423684" data-attributes="member: 6887057"><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">i would appreciate feedback on how i can improve it</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'"></span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'"></span></span><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">So far i came up with this</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Gauntlet of The Apocalypse Dragon </span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Wondrous Item, Artifact (Requires Attunement)</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Aegis Of the Damned: As a action, the wielder of the Gauntlet is able to summon a set of Plate Armour. While the wielder is wearing the armour, they gain resistance to all breath weapons for dragons</span></span></span><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'"></span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'"></span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">The player can use it's bonus action to emit a 10ft aura around them</span></span></span><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'"><span style="font-size: 12px">.When a creature starts it turn in the aura or moves into the aura,must succeed on DC 16 Dex saving throw or they take 2d10 Fire Damage as well as 2d10 Cold Damage and half as much on a successful save. </span>The player will be able to sustain the aura for 10 minutes per day in increments of one minute at a time, and regain the minutes use per hour the player has rested</span></span><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Flesh of Ice and Fire: When attuned to the gauntlet, you gain the following benefits:</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">You have Resistance to both fire and cold damage.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">You don't suffer the effects of extreme heat and cold.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Sentience. The Gauntlets of the Apocalypse Dragon is a sentient Chaotic Evil item with an Intelligence of 16, a Wisdom of 10, and a Charisma of 20. It has hearing and darkvision out to a range of 120 feet.</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">The item can speak, read, and understand Common, Draconic. In addition, the item can</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">communicate telepathically with any character that carries or wields it. </span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Personality. The Gauntlet's sole purpose is to eliminate every single dragon in existence and absorb the power of them in order to reach perfection. </span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">Curse: The wearer is compelled to seek out dragons no matter their colour or alignment and will attack them without remorse</span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">The Player is instantly aware of any dragon within a 5 mile radius, even if it is shape changed into another being (e.g. humanoid) </span></span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="font-size: 12px"><span style="color: #333333"><span style="font-family: 'arial'">When the player senses a dragon with in 5 miles , they must succeed on a DC 18 Wisdom save or become Compelled , and seek out nearest dragon and slain it, and once slain the effect of the Compelled fades and you cant be affected charm again until the next dawn</span></span></span></span></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Richard Brookes, post: 7423684, member: 6887057"] [SIZE=3][COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]i would appreciate feedback on how i can improve it [/FONT][/COLOR][COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]So far i came up with this[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Gauntlet of The Apocalypse Dragon [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Wondrous Item, Artifact (Requires Attunement)[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Aegis Of the Damned: As a action, the wielder of the Gauntlet is able to summon a set of Plate Armour. While the wielder is wearing the armour, they gain resistance to all breath weapons for dragons[/FONT][/COLOR][/SIZE][SIZE=3][COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial] The player can use it's bonus action to emit a 10ft aura around them[/FONT][/COLOR][/SIZE][COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial][SIZE=3].When a creature starts it turn in the aura or moves into the aura,must succeed on DC 16 Dex saving throw or they take 2d10 Fire Damage as well as 2d10 Cold Damage and half as much on a successful save. [/SIZE]The player will be able to sustain the aura for 10 minutes per day in increments of one minute at a time, and regain the minutes use per hour the player has rested[/FONT][/COLOR][SIZE=3] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Flesh of Ice and Fire: When attuned to the gauntlet, you gain the following benefits:[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]You have Resistance to both fire and cold damage.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]You don't suffer the effects of extreme heat and cold.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Sentience. The Gauntlets of the Apocalypse Dragon is a sentient Chaotic Evil item with an Intelligence of 16, a Wisdom of 10, and a Charisma of 20. It has hearing and darkvision out to a range of 120 feet.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]The item can speak, read, and understand Common, Draconic. In addition, the item can[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]communicate telepathically with any character that carries or wields it. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Personality. The Gauntlet's sole purpose is to eliminate every single dragon in existence and absorb the power of them in order to reach perfection. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]Curse: The wearer is compelled to seek out dragons no matter their colour or alignment and will attack them without remorse[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]The Player is instantly aware of any dragon within a 5 mile radius, even if it is shape changed into another being (e.g. humanoid) [/FONT][/COLOR] [SIZE=3][COLOR=#333333][FONT=arial]When the player senses a dragon with in 5 miles , they must succeed on a DC 18 Wisdom save or become Compelled , and seek out nearest dragon and slain it, and once slain the effect of the Compelled fades and you cant be affected charm again until the next dawn[/FONT][/COLOR][/SIZE][/SIZE] [/QUOTE]
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