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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Trainz" data-source="post: 1399694" data-attributes="member: 2122">thullgrim: she's all yours. DiFier, do not worry about the length of your description. I created such a kick-arse room with the intent that someone would take full advantage of it, and you did. Congrats on the ingenuity of your room ! <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />  A few things: please put your full name beside your room description ( I know that I already have it, but it's easier to edit in post-prod if all the info is where it's supposed to be), and please correct your submission. Do NOT take this as an insult, <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" /> I just spotted the mistakes for you to help you out in fixing your contribution: <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />  […]has a door opeing (opening) into […]empty wall sconces to hold torches (.)the (The) sconces are […]searching the columns specificly (specifically) (DC 10) they […]they probablly (probably) will […]The zombie's ring corrisponds (corresponds) to the motif of the colums (columns) that […]struck by flying debries (debris). The west […]of the dais is smoth (smooth) black stone. The […]slide under the easrten (eastern) one but It is closed […]The only thing carved into is is (repetition) the name Merodak […]must place the corisponding (corresponding) ring onto the finger […]the locking mechinism (mechanism) opening the stone […] light source is intrupted (interrupted) , wheather (whether) blocked or when the […]has a silver circuilet (circlet) around his forehead […]is about 2 inchs (inches) in diameter […]the mace that the statue is holding and currentlly (currently) pointing directly at the PCs […]Chill Touch (3rd level, 1/day used thorugh (through) the mace […]a pair of barcers (bracers) of armor +1 […]Attack Slamb (slam) +4 mele (melee) 1d6+1; lamb +4 mele (melee) […] I might have missed a few things, so even after you applied those edits, I invite you to check it in a spell-checker. I would like to take this opportunity to remember all contributors that it is mandatory to spell check your submission before posting it (as stated in the instructions of the first post. You DID read the instructions carefully, now, did you ? <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f621.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":mad:" title="Mad    :mad:"  data-smilie="4"data-shortname=":mad:" /> <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" /> ). By not doing so, it will take longer before the dungeon is ready for download. Do it for yourself. Do it for all ENworlders. Do it for your country. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f60e.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":cool:" title="Cool    :cool:"  data-smilie="6"data-shortname=":cool:" /> </blockquote>

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