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<blockquote data-quote="der_kluge" data-source="post: 1408508" data-attributes="member: 945">Well, I was planning on maybe running this dungeon tonight, since we were gonna be short a few players, but we're only going to be down one player, so I'm going to run my regular campaign.But, while compiling all these rooms, I compiled a bit of errata, and also formatted it into a Word Doc in case anyone else wants to run it.Here is the errata (just some grammar and spelling stuff)room #1change &quot;Two Shadow&quot; to &quot;Two Shadows&quot;(passive voice) change &quot;are lurking behind&quot; to &quot;lurk behind&quot;room #3 change &quot;two bays of column&quot; to &quot;two bays of columns&quot;better yet &quot;Two bays of columns hide the walls.&quot;one word &quot;northwest&quot;, not north west.four-inchstatistics, not &quot;stats&quot;remove space before &quot;hardness&quot;non-magical, not nonamagicalsentence starting with &quot;Upon careful&quot; is too long.4-inch, not 4 inch.&quot;lid at its&quot;, not &quot;lid at it's&quot;&quot;fits into the hole, have them...&quot;()'s around &quot;DC 24&quot;Sentence starting with &quot;If the PCs cannot&quot; should be rewritten.50gp, not 50 gp&quot;It take the lid&quot; to &quot;It takes the lid&quot;room #4ahve to have&quot;smoke that billows&quot;where is &quot;The Environment&quot; defined?mat, not mattweaked to weaken&quot;)is&quot; to &quot;) is&quot;charage to chargeroom #5rhytmically to rhythmically &quot;velvet which&quot; to &quot;velvet that&quot;&quot;north and south&quot; not &quot;North and South&quot;canot to cannotdragonbone (or do you mean dragon bane?), should be &quot;a weapon made from the bone of a dragon&quot;strengten to strengthenembarrasing to embarrassingroom #6northen to northernrealise to realizefood stuffs to foodstuffs&quot;lid of the barrels&quot; to &quot;lids of the barrels&quot;southeast, not south eastextraplanar, not extraplanerroom #7cubbords to cupboards&quot;,&quot; after &quot;cleaver shouting, &quot;&quot;a irratable&quot; to &quot;an irratable&quot;&quot;tempermental&quot; to &quot;temperamantal&quot;&quot;tonite&quot; to &quot;tonight&quot;??!?!, etc, non-standard. Replace with &quot;?&quot;telekensis to &quot;telekinesis&quot;vomitting to vomiting&quot;easyyyyyyyy!!!&quot; to &quot;easily!&quot;dissapear to disappear&quot;he get's some&quot; to &quot;he gets some&quot;squeel to squealroom #8Paladin's to paladin'senshrinment to enshrinement (is it a word?)room #9fix &quot; Features: Features :&quot;weilding to wielding (x2)burried to buriedlayed to laidnonethereal to non-ethereal (x2)reprecussions to repercussions room #10skeliton(s) to skeleton(s) (x2)idley to idlyroom #11sacophagus to sarcophagussacophagi to sarcophagi300 gps to 300gpinstanly to instantly (x2)nontlethal to non-lethalorginal to originaltride to triberesting place to resting-placethier to theirroom #12grey to grayind control? (Int control??)Wisdon to Wisdomroom #13impenatrable to impenetrable thenorth to &quot;the north&quot;afixed to affixedroom #14&quot;Damnations Domain&quot; to &quot;Damnation's Domain&quot;&quot;language which&quot; to &quot;language that&quot;Dias to Dais&quot;candle holders&quot; to candleholders&quot;ghasts which&quot; to &quot;ghasts that&quot;whoever to whomever (attack whomever is closest)&quot;based.An&quot; to &quot;based. An&quot;Here is my file.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="der_kluge, post: 1408508, member: 945"] Well, I was planning on maybe running this dungeon tonight, since we were gonna be short a few players, but we're only going to be down one player, so I'm going to run my regular campaign. But, while compiling all these rooms, I compiled a bit of errata, and also formatted it into a Word Doc in case anyone else wants to run it. Here is the errata (just some grammar and spelling stuff) room #1 change "Two Shadow" to "Two Shadows" (passive voice) change "are lurking behind" to "lurk behind" room #3 change "two bays of column" to "two bays of columns" better yet "Two bays of columns hide the walls." one word "northwest", not north west. four-inch statistics, not "stats" remove space before "hardness" non-magical, not nonamagical sentence starting with "Upon careful" is too long. 4-inch, not 4 inch. "lid at its", not "lid at it's" "fits into the hole, have them..." ()'s around "DC 24" Sentence starting with "If the PCs cannot" should be rewritten. 50gp, not 50 gp "It take the lid" to "It takes the lid" room #4 ahve to have "smoke that billows" where is "The Environment" defined? mat, not matt weaked to weaken ")is" to ") is" charage to charge room #5 rhytmically to rhythmically "velvet which" to "velvet that" "north and south" not "North and South" canot to cannot dragonbone (or do you mean dragon bane?), should be "a weapon made from the bone of a dragon" strengten to strengthen embarrasing to embarrassing room #6 northen to northern realise to realize food stuffs to foodstuffs "lid of the barrels" to "lids of the barrels" southeast, not south east extraplanar, not extraplaner room #7 cubbords to cupboards "," after "cleaver shouting, " "a irratable" to "an irratable" "tempermental" to "temperamantal" "tonite" to "tonight" ??!?!, etc, non-standard. Replace with "?" telekensis to "telekinesis" vomitting to vomiting "easyyyyyyyy!!!" to "easily!" dissapear to disappear "he get's some" to "he gets some" squeel to squeal room #8 Paladin's to paladin's enshrinment to enshrinement (is it a word?) room #9 fix " Features: Features :" weilding to wielding (x2) burried to buried layed to laid nonethereal to non-ethereal (x2) reprecussions to repercussions room #10 skeliton(s) to skeleton(s) (x2) idley to idly room #11 sacophagus to sarcophagus sacophagi to sarcophagi 300 gps to 300gp instanly to instantly (x2) nontlethal to non-lethal orginal to original tride to tribe resting place to resting-place thier to their room #12 grey to gray ind control? (Int control??) Wisdon to Wisdom room #13 impenatrable to impenetrable thenorth to "the north" afixed to affixed room #14 "Damnations Domain" to "Damnation's Domain" "language which" to "language that" Dias to Dais "candle holders" to candleholders "ghasts which" to "ghasts that" whoever to whomever (attack whomever is closest) "based.An" to "based. An" Here is my file. [/QUOTE]

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