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<blockquote data-quote="carpedavid" data-source="post: 1628819" data-attributes="member: 6971"><p>Thanks for the kind words, Zhaneel. All of your comments are vey good - and seem to fit into what others have said as well. Based upon the feedback that I'm getting from both the judges and contestants and other readers, I think I'm going to revise the story and post it in the Kiln-fired thread after the contest is over.</p><p> </p><p>Specifically, it looks like I need to better define and expand the relationship between Kat and the doctor, better explain whose memories are being related at any given point, and better flesh out some of the background. I want to maintain some ambiguity in certain places, but I think I can do that and make it intelligible to people who don't have the benefit of living inside my head.</p><p> </p><p>One of the goals of writing this was to make the whole thing a strange little loop that wraps in on itself, but it looks like I have some work to do to reach that goal. Thanks to all so far for the comments - the more I get, the better I can make the story!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="carpedavid, post: 1628819, member: 6971"] Thanks for the kind words, Zhaneel. All of your comments are vey good - and seem to fit into what others have said as well. Based upon the feedback that I'm getting from both the judges and contestants and other readers, I think I'm going to revise the story and post it in the Kiln-fired thread after the contest is over. Specifically, it looks like I need to better define and expand the relationship between Kat and the doctor, better explain whose memories are being related at any given point, and better flesh out some of the background. I want to maintain some ambiguity in certain places, but I think I can do that and make it intelligible to people who don't have the benefit of living inside my head. One of the goals of writing this was to make the whole thing a strange little loop that wraps in on itself, but it looks like I have some work to do to reach that goal. Thanks to all so far for the comments - the more I get, the better I can make the story! [/QUOTE]
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