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<blockquote data-quote="Eeralai" data-source="post: 2345677" data-attributes="member: 15008"><p><strong>chit chat</strong></p><p></p><p>Disillusionment: I read Berandor's story Sunday night (I'm trying to read one from each set of pics) and had a few comments to offer:</p><p></p><p>[sblock] I think my comments are going to sound more like someone reading it for a book club rather than from a writer. I always like your writing style and have said before how amazed I am that English is a second language to you and not your first. I so wanted this story to end on a happier note. Maybe it was because I still hadn't gotten over the ending for Hellefire's story, but I think there was a little more to it than that, and I finally figured out what that was while packing up some more boxes.</p><p></p><p>No one else has commented on the Alice and Wonderland similarities, so maybe I am way off base here. But when she delves into Sharon's mind, she sees Sharon as a little girl who has cried a river of tears, like Alice, and runs into the two sunflowers that seem very much like Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum from Alice. Their banter does that is. So I think this scene led me to believe that she was going to wake up, just as Alice had. It's your story to write as you want, I am merely making an observation.</p><p></p><p>The story pulled me in though, because it was all about mind scapes and souls and those are some of my favorite topics. As with Hellefire's story, I can't say that I enjoyed it, but I definitely wanted to read more, and was pulled right along by it. Thanks for sharing it! [/sblock]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Eeralai, post: 2345677, member: 15008"] [b]chit chat[/b] Disillusionment: I read Berandor's story Sunday night (I'm trying to read one from each set of pics) and had a few comments to offer: [sblock] I think my comments are going to sound more like someone reading it for a book club rather than from a writer. I always like your writing style and have said before how amazed I am that English is a second language to you and not your first. I so wanted this story to end on a happier note. Maybe it was because I still hadn't gotten over the ending for Hellefire's story, but I think there was a little more to it than that, and I finally figured out what that was while packing up some more boxes. No one else has commented on the Alice and Wonderland similarities, so maybe I am way off base here. But when she delves into Sharon's mind, she sees Sharon as a little girl who has cried a river of tears, like Alice, and runs into the two sunflowers that seem very much like Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum from Alice. Their banter does that is. So I think this scene led me to believe that she was going to wake up, just as Alice had. It's your story to write as you want, I am merely making an observation. The story pulled me in though, because it was all about mind scapes and souls and those are some of my favorite topics. As with Hellefire's story, I can't say that I enjoyed it, but I definitely wanted to read more, and was pulled right along by it. Thanks for sharing it! [/sblock] [/QUOTE]
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