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<blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 2441787" data-attributes="member: 225"><p>On my story:</p><p>[sblock]Thanks, RangerWickett! I'm glad someone likes it <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> The sappiness was semi-influenced by Eeralai, who commented on the lack of happy endings in my stories, so I wanted to write one she'd like. And I had the problem that the "polyhedron" pic totally reminded me of "Seven Days" (the TV show), and I couldn't get rid of that reference.</p><p></p><p>And for the record (and in spoilers, heh), I don't like the kung-fu pics. It means I have to have a fistfight in the story, or someone versed in martial arts, or both. Of course, I usually take the pictures too literally, and that works against me there, as well.[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>Your amazing story:</p><p>[sblock]First off, I have to commend you on your impeccable writing. It's a very clear, and extremely readable style. I'm a little envious <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>Second, I wonder how you do it. I mean, you tell me of an asylum's director that needs all his inmates to correspond to Batman villains, and I accept that at face value. It's a really cool and very, very insane world you describe, which might be the reason why it seems so familiar.</p><p>A lot of your references seem almost random (what's that armed chick doing there?), but again, I don't mind. Why? Beats me. Probably because it's a good story.</p><p>The one thing I have to say is your last entry is very much a sequel. I'm glad I took the time yesterday to read the last one (as well as reveal's and speaker's), because I think I would have been a little confused otherwise at Jessica and the devil, especially.</p><p>If you can't help but get drawn into your competition's story, it's a good one - even without Leonard Chohen references <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" />[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>So... any estimation on when judgements arrive? <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Berandor, post: 2441787, member: 225"] On my story: [sblock]Thanks, RangerWickett! I'm glad someone likes it :) The sappiness was semi-influenced by Eeralai, who commented on the lack of happy endings in my stories, so I wanted to write one she'd like. And I had the problem that the "polyhedron" pic totally reminded me of "Seven Days" (the TV show), and I couldn't get rid of that reference. And for the record (and in spoilers, heh), I don't like the kung-fu pics. It means I have to have a fistfight in the story, or someone versed in martial arts, or both. Of course, I usually take the pictures too literally, and that works against me there, as well.[/sblock] Your amazing story: [sblock]First off, I have to commend you on your impeccable writing. It's a very clear, and extremely readable style. I'm a little envious :) Second, I wonder how you do it. I mean, you tell me of an asylum's director that needs all his inmates to correspond to Batman villains, and I accept that at face value. It's a really cool and very, very insane world you describe, which might be the reason why it seems so familiar. A lot of your references seem almost random (what's that armed chick doing there?), but again, I don't mind. Why? Beats me. Probably because it's a good story. The one thing I have to say is your last entry is very much a sequel. I'm glad I took the time yesterday to read the last one (as well as reveal's and speaker's), because I think I would have been a little confused otherwise at Jessica and the devil, especially. If you can't help but get drawn into your competition's story, it's a good one - even without Leonard Chohen references ;)[/sblock] So... any estimation on when judgements arrive? :D [/QUOTE]
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