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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 3381697" data-attributes="member: 225">Comments:[sblock]mythago: I'm sad to see you didn't have time to finish your story. What's there is very intriguing, I like it! And when you say you didn't have the time, I know that's no exaggeration. I hope things will become a little less stressful for you in the following weeks.carpedavid: So, when you had no words left, someone made you a great package deal for new ones? <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> Once again, a great story, one that reminds me of the tale in Neil Gaiman's "Sandman" (I believe). Very, very nice. I'd agree with Piratecat that the ending was a little too abrupt, and I'm now confused whether Fehai was the original, reincarnated as part of his "job", or whether the new Fehai now was destined to become a watcher, so to speak. There's also this one moment in the beginning, with Bo, where you switch narrative perspective. On the other hand, the description of the martial arts was excellent, both exciting and a little funny with people shouting their techniques at each other. That reminded me of "You Bastard!" Really, a great story, once again, and if Rodrigo cannot stop Piratecat, you most certainly can. Whether you will stop him, that's another question, just as whether you'll even get the chance. But here and now, three great stories in a row, I'm already looking forward to your next entry.[/sblock]Edit: Post #666 :evil:</blockquote>

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