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<blockquote data-quote="Dragonbait" data-source="post: 4471442" data-attributes="member: 29182"><p><span style="color: white"><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">Might I recommend their daily power be less aggressive and damage-oriented. Your descriptive terms contradict the feral nature of their berserker rage. </span></span></p><p> </p><p><span style="color: white"><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">If you want to keep the savage aggressiveness in which they defend their allies, then I recommend making them less docile and passive in personality. They are too perfect as written. It’s like an uber elf fanboy was describing elves (they’re pretty and nice and perfect and artistic and peaceful and can kick butt and everyone likes them except for a few intolerant people). Add some negative aspects to the description. The vicious fury that sparks their rage has to come from somewhere and probably shows up in more cases than just combat. If you look through the PH, the races have both positive and negative social and psychological traits listed.</span></span></p><p> </p><p><span style="color: white"><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">PS: Also, I'd recommend changing the "to play a furry race" to something like "to play a centauric (no idea of what term to use) race", since this race is a bit more unusual than a run-of-the-mill anthropomorphic race that some would call furry.</span></span></p><p> </p><p><span style="color: white"><span style="font-family: 'Verdana'">PSS: Personally, the name Chakat can stick. I doubt most people would recognize it (well.. I didn’t.. But I’m not really net savvy), and the lolfurrezlol people would have said that at any point in the description (feline people? Hermaphrodite feline people!? Lolfurrezlol) and not reacted to just the name.</span></span></p><p> </p><p></p><p>Edit: *fewh* where was my coffee when I tried to respond to this post? Fixed spelling, grammar, and clarified things.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Dragonbait, post: 4471442, member: 29182"] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana]Might I recommend their daily power be less aggressive and damage-oriented. Your descriptive terms contradict the feral nature of their berserker rage. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana]If you want to keep the savage aggressiveness in which they defend their allies, then I recommend making them less docile and passive in personality. They are too perfect as written. It’s like an uber elf fanboy was describing elves (they’re pretty and nice and perfect and artistic and peaceful and can kick butt and everyone likes them except for a few intolerant people). Add some negative aspects to the description. The vicious fury that sparks their rage has to come from somewhere and probably shows up in more cases than just combat. If you look through the PH, the races have both positive and negative social and psychological traits listed.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana]PS: Also, I'd recommend changing the "to play a furry race" to something like "to play a centauric (no idea of what term to use) race", since this race is a bit more unusual than a run-of-the-mill anthropomorphic race that some would call furry.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana]PSS: Personally, the name Chakat can stick. I doubt most people would recognize it (well.. I didn’t.. But I’m not really net savvy), and the lolfurrezlol people would have said that at any point in the description (feline people? Hermaphrodite feline people!? Lolfurrezlol) and not reacted to just the name.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][FONT=Verdana] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=white][SIZE=3][FONT=Times New Roman][/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR] Edit: *fewh* where was my coffee when I tried to respond to this post? Fixed spelling, grammar, and clarified things. [/QUOTE]
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