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<blockquote data-quote="trix" data-source="post: 343732" data-attributes="member: 5337">One thing I noticed was that alot of the settings seemed to focus their setting around one region, or one country, writing in a very &quot;localised&quot; manner.&nbsp; The setting might have been the guide to a small country, not a setting.Nature of divinity is good break it up into:-Theme Overview (100 words max)-Setting History (Divine)-Setting History (Legendary Heroes)-Typical Villians &amp; Arch Nemisis overview-Magic History/Background-Whats DifferentDrop the whole 1 sentence for world ethos, make it &quot;no longer than 100 words&quot;.Drop the whole &quot;Who are the heroes?&quot;.That Q was dumb.&nbsp; Tieing it to the history of legendary heroes is good as it allows the author to flush out some major events that shape the history, and thus the world.The setting villians and arch nemisis helps flush out who villians are.There needs to be a bit more. Anyway, ive gotta go.-Tim</blockquote>

[QUOTE="trix, post: 343732, member: 5337"] One thing I noticed was that alot of the settings seemed to focus their setting around one region, or one country, writing in a very "localised" manner. The setting might have been the guide to a small country, not a setting. Nature of divinity is good break it up into: -Theme Overview (100 words max) -Setting History (Divine) -Setting History (Legendary Heroes) -Typical Villians & Arch Nemisis overview -Magic History/Background -Whats Different Drop the whole 1 sentence for world ethos, make it "no longer than 100 words". Drop the whole "Who are the heroes?". That Q was dumb. Tieing it to the history of legendary heroes is good as it allows the author to flush out some major events that shape the history, and thus the world. The setting villians and arch nemisis helps flush out who villians are. There needs to be a bit more. Anyway, ive gotta go. -Tim [/QUOTE]

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