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<blockquote data-quote="Candide" data-source="post: 1847403" data-attributes="member: 17878">Finally, my characterHere he is. This was my first classless BESM character, so I'd like help on where I might have messed up. Namely his special attack. I think I did the math horribly wrong.Name: OnigaraRace: DemonStarting level or CP: 170(50base +120 +whatever defects)Stats: 46 cpStr:&nbsp; 50 +20&nbsp; (18base +2race +28superstrength +2Enhanced STR)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 9Dex: 43 +16&nbsp; (18base +2race +20Enhanced DEX +3lvl points)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 9Con: 20 +5&nbsp;&nbsp; (18base +2race)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 9Int:&nbsp; 10 +0&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 5Wis: 16 +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 8Cha: 12 +1&nbsp;&nbsp; (10base +2race)&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 6Hp: 119&nbsp; (12d8 for 24 cp)AC: +13(+16 dex, -3Inept Defense)Saves: 8cpFort +9&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; (4base + 5con)Ref +20&nbsp; &nbsp; (4base + 19dex)Will +3&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; (0base +3wis)Bab: +11/+6/+1&nbsp;&nbsp; 33cpFull Attack: (katana) +31/+26/+21Damage: (katana) 1d10+30(str)+20(massive damage)Initiative Modifier: +32(+16dex, +12speed, +4improved initiative)Powers: Super-Strength: Rank4; +28 Str&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 16cpSpeed: rank6&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +12 to init., huge traveling speed,&nbsp; 12cpMassive Damage(katana) rank10; +20 damage with katana&nbsp; &nbsp; 20cpHeightened Sense(Hearing) rank5; +10 on listen checks.&nbsp; &nbsp; 5cpSpecial Defense: Aging&nbsp;&nbsp; 2cp(taken twice; does not age)Personal Gear: rank1; katana with cane scabbard, fine suit, sunglassesJumping: rank2; +40 to jumpAttack Combat Mastery: rank 11; Bab +11/+6/+1Feats:5x Sneak AttackImproved InitiativeSkills: (8+Int) 24cpClimb +35Hide +31Intimidate +16Jump +75Listen +28Move Silently +31Spot +14Onigara's demon racial stats:+2 STR, DEX, CON, CHA-DarkvisionBase Movement of 30ft.Defects: 26bpAchilles Heel&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2bp (Holy symbols)Bane&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2bp (Holy water)Blind Fury&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2bp&nbsp; Detectable&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1bp (facial features/ears)Easily Distracted&nbsp;&nbsp; 1bp (things of beauty. Mostly girls)Famous&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2bp&nbsp;&nbsp; (in Netherworld as an assassin, and in Real world for being one of the best swordsmen ever/assassin)Inept Defense&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 6bp&nbsp;&nbsp; -3 to ACMarked&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 2bp&nbsp;&nbsp; (Mostly human features, but demonic accents)Significant O.(pc)&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 1bp rank3&nbsp;&nbsp; (protects Genryu the shadow dragon, not sure of relation yet. Looks at her as a younger sister)Wanted&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2bp&nbsp;&nbsp; (I have a higher profile than most assassins)Sensory Impairment 1bp (short-sightedness)Vulnerability&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 2bp(holy water)Onigara, the Fallen. His true origins are known only to a few. His father, brothers and Genryu. Originally from the Netherworld, he carries the essence of demons in his blood. His features are mostly human, but have demonic accents like pointed ears, sharp teeth, red/orange/yellow irises in his eyes. He possess an unholy speed, a bit of charm, a razor sharp wit and immense strength. He has not been beated in a swordfight. Ever. He is too quick and too deadly for any mortal to fight, though that doesn't stop them from trying. He gladly issues and accepts any fighting challenge where he can show off his expertise. He is a fan of bloodshed and gore, his style with his katana uses flourishing moves that allow for blood to be scattered about everywhere. His eyes are red as flame, hair the color of silvery white. In the modern Earth world, he wears a stylish black suit and has his katana tucked inside a cane.He is often called by his brothers a weakling, because of his human appearence. Only part of him is human.Onigara, though quite a bad guy, has a less-vile side. He loves things that are beautiful like art, flowers and girls. He has a following of young girls wherever he goes. Once or twice he's reciprocated affection for one of them. He looks to Genryu as a little sister. He was one of the trainers she studied under as she grew up. He tries to protect her, a fact that she takes with a grain of salt.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Candide, post: 1847403, member: 17878"] [b]Finally, my character[/b] Here he is. This was my first classless BESM character, so I'd like help on where I might have messed up. Namely his special attack. I think I did the math horribly wrong. Name: Onigara Race: Demon Starting level or CP: 170(50base +120 +whatever defects) Stats: 46 cp Str: 50 +20 (18base +2race +28superstrength +2Enhanced STR) 9 Dex: 43 +16 (18base +2race +20Enhanced DEX +3lvl points) 9 Con: 20 +5 (18base +2race) 9 Int: 10 +0 5 Wis: 16 +3 8 Cha: 12 +1 (10base +2race) 6 Hp: 119 (12d8 for 24 cp) AC: +13(+16 dex, -3Inept Defense) Saves: 8cp Fort +9 (4base + 5con) Ref +20 (4base + 19dex) Will +3 (0base +3wis) Bab: +11/+6/+1 33cp Full Attack: (katana) +31/+26/+21 Damage: (katana) 1d10+30(str)+20(massive damage) Initiative Modifier: +32(+16dex, +12speed, +4improved initiative) Powers: Super-Strength: Rank4; +28 Str 16cp Speed: rank6 +12 to init., huge traveling speed, 12cp Massive Damage(katana) rank10; +20 damage with katana 20cp Heightened Sense(Hearing) rank5; +10 on listen checks. 5cp Special Defense: Aging 2cp(taken twice; does not age) Personal Gear: rank1; katana with cane scabbard, fine suit, sunglasses Jumping: rank2; +40 to jump Attack Combat Mastery: rank 11; Bab +11/+6/+1 Feats: 5x Sneak Attack Improved Initiative Skills: (8+Int) 24cp Climb +35 Hide +31 Intimidate +16 Jump +75 Listen +28 Move Silently +31 Spot +14 Onigara's demon racial stats: +2 STR, DEX, CON, CHA -Darkvision Base Movement of 30ft. Defects: 26bp Achilles Heel 2bp (Holy symbols) Bane 2bp (Holy water) Blind Fury 2bp Detectable 1bp (facial features/ears) Easily Distracted 1bp (things of beauty. Mostly girls) Famous 2bp (in Netherworld as an assassin, and in Real world for being one of the best swordsmen ever/assassin) Inept Defense 6bp -3 to AC Marked 2bp (Mostly human features, but demonic accents) Significant O.(pc) 1bp rank3 (protects Genryu the shadow dragon, not sure of relation yet. Looks at her as a younger sister) Wanted 2bp (I have a higher profile than most assassins) Sensory Impairment 1bp (short-sightedness) Vulnerability 2bp(holy water) Onigara, the Fallen. His true origins are known only to a few. His father, brothers and Genryu. Originally from the Netherworld, he carries the essence of demons in his blood. His features are mostly human, but have demonic accents like pointed ears, sharp teeth, red/orange/yellow irises in his eyes. He possess an unholy speed, a bit of charm, a razor sharp wit and immense strength. He has not been beated in a swordfight. Ever. He is too quick and too deadly for any mortal to fight, though that doesn't stop them from trying. He gladly issues and accepts any fighting challenge where he can show off his expertise. He is a fan of bloodshed and gore, his style with his katana uses flourishing moves that allow for blood to be scattered about everywhere. His eyes are red as flame, hair the color of silvery white. In the modern Earth world, he wears a stylish black suit and has his katana tucked inside a cane. He is often called by his brothers a weakling, because of his human appearence. Only part of him is human. Onigara, though quite a bad guy, has a less-vile side. He loves things that are beautiful like art, flowers and girls. He has a following of young girls wherever he goes. Once or twice he's reciprocated affection for one of them. He looks to Genryu as a little sister. He was one of the trainers she studied under as she grew up. He tries to protect her, a fact that she takes with a grain of salt. [/QUOTE]

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