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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 5682912" data-attributes="member: 57383">Don't think so, we've covered the Croc-Men under the Gurrash.Anyhow, the Cayman has a few problems.#1It has an &quot;In Mystara&quot; section that's all about Shazaks! Better rewrite it to match the Cayman's Mystaran history.#2They have Hold Breath listed in their Special Quality line and &quot;As Characters&quot;, but no description of the SQ in Combat. Either cut that SQ or give it the Lizardfolk's version. I also just realized the Shazak and Gurrash are missing their Hold Breath description too.Hold Breath (Ex): A lizardfolk can hold its breath for a number of rounds equal to four times its Constitution score before it risks drowning.#3The organization would read better with &quot;plus 10-60 riding lizards and 1-4 aurochs#4It should have cayman, not shazak, in the Skills &quot;Because of their tails, shazak have a +4 racial bonus on Balance, Jump, and Swim checks.&quot;#5There's an extraneous questionmark in &quot;Automatic Languages: Common, Draconic. Bonus Languages: Aquan, Gnoll, Orc, Undercommon?&quot;.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 5682912, member: 57383"] Don't think so, we've covered the Croc-Men under the Gurrash. Anyhow, the Cayman has a few problems. [I][B]#1[/B][/I] It has an "In Mystara" section that's all about Shazaks! Better rewrite it to match the Cayman's Mystaran history. [I][B]#2 [/B][/I]They have Hold Breath listed in their Special Quality line and "As Characters", but no description of the SQ in Combat. Either cut that SQ or give it the Lizardfolk's version. I also just realized the Shazak and Gurrash are missing their Hold Breath description too. [B]Hold Breath (Ex):[/B] A lizardfolk can hold its breath for a number of rounds equal to four times its Constitution score before it risks drowning. [I][B]#3[/B][/I] The organization would read better with "plus 10-60 riding lizards [COLOR=Red][B]and [/B][/COLOR]1-4 aurochs [I][B]#4[/B][/I] It should have cayman, not shazak, in the Skills "Because of their tails, [B][COLOR=Red]shazak[/COLOR][/B] have a +4 racial bonus on Balance, Jump, and Swim checks." [I][B]#5[/B][/I] There's an extraneous questionmark in "Automatic Languages: Common, Draconic. Bonus Languages: Aquan, Gnoll, Orc, Undercommon?". [/QUOTE]

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