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<blockquote data-quote="freyar" data-source="post: 5934633" data-attributes="member: 40227">I didn't say &quot;viscous,&quot; actually. There's an &quot;i&quot; in there.&nbsp; <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)"&nbsp; data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />And, while I won't quibble with &quot;large,&quot; nik'too are Large, just like a horse.&nbsp; The rest is fine, although there are some misplaced commas and run-ons.&nbsp; Editing:A large turtle-like creature with a viciously sharp beak.A nikto'oo is not a turtle, although it looks very much like one. These reptilian creatures can breathe both water and air. Their shells are mostly thick hide, with inserts of bony plates. Female nikt'oo live in the sea and in coastal forests. Male nikt'oo live in the sea, emerging onto the shore only to fight for mates and breed. Nikt'oo can be tamed and trained as mounts and beasts of burden. Usually only female nikt'oo are trained, as the flipper-footed males are far more aggressive can not move easily on land. Nikt'oo are mostly domesticated by tortles, snappers, and other reptilian humanoids.An adult niktoo is typically 10 to 12 feet long and stands about 3 feet high. Adult female nikt'oo can weigh 2,500 pounds or even more. Male nikt'oo can grow much bigger than females, reaching lengths of up to 20 feet.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="freyar, post: 5934633, member: 40227"] I didn't say "viscous," actually. There's an "i" in there. ;) And, while I won't quibble with "large," nik'too are Large, just like a horse. The rest is fine, although there are some misplaced commas and run-ons. Editing: A large turtle-like creature with a viciously sharp beak. A nikto'oo is not a turtle, although it looks very much like one. These reptilian creatures can breathe both water and air. Their shells are mostly thick hide, with inserts of bony plates. Female nikt'oo live in the sea and in coastal forests. Male nikt'oo live in the sea, emerging onto the shore only to fight for mates and breed. Nikt'oo can be tamed and trained as mounts and beasts of burden. Usually only female nikt'oo are trained, as the flipper-footed males are far more aggressive can not move easily on land. Nikt'oo are mostly domesticated by tortles, snappers, and other reptilian humanoids. An adult niktoo is typically 10 to 12 feet long and stands about 3 feet high. Adult female nikt'oo can weigh 2,500 pounds or even more. Male nikt'oo can grow much bigger than females, reaching lengths of up to 20 feet. [/QUOTE]

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