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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 5591262" data-attributes="member: 57383">Looks pretty good, except for a few quibbles.They are Tiny sized, not Small.They ought to have the Amphibious trait, so they can live out of water!Their Swim should be +9 (if they use Dex) or +4 (if they use Str).They need a weight - 1 pound ought to do.I'd like to rework the first sentence of the Power Drain, &quot;A psionic leech can drain 1 power point per minute from a single character with a psionic power point reserve within 1 foot.&quot; is so long it makes it unclear what the &quot;within 1 foot&quot; refers to.How's this:Power Drain (Ps): A psionic leech can drain psionic energy at a range of 1 foot. The leech can drain 1 power point per minute&nbsp; from a single character with a psionic power point reserve. A psionic leech gains a pool of power points equal to the points drained&nbsp; from other characters; power points remain in the leech's pool for 8&nbsp; hours (see Concussion Blast, above). A psionic leech can hold up to 10&nbsp; power points in its pool; if it exceeds this limit the leech reproduces&nbsp; (see Spawn, below). The victim is normally unaware of the power point drain, but&nbsp; can make a DC 14 Will save each minute to negate the drain and become&nbsp; aware of the drain attempt. This ability is the equivalent of a&nbsp; 4th-level power.&nbsp; The save DC is Charisma-based.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 5591262, member: 57383"] Looks pretty good, except for a few quibbles. They are Tiny sized, not Small. They ought to have the Amphibious trait, so they can live out of water! Their Swim should be +9 (if they use Dex) or +4 (if they use Str). They need a weight - 1 pound ought to do. I'd like to rework the first sentence of the Power Drain, "A psionic leech can drain 1 power point per minute from a single character with a psionic power point reserve within 1 foot." is so long it makes it unclear what the "within 1 foot" refers to. How's this: [B]Power Drain (Ps):[/B] A psionic leech can drain psionic energy at a range of 1 foot. The leech can drain 1 power point per minute from a single character with a psionic power point reserve. A psionic leech gains a pool of power points equal to the points drained from other characters; power points remain in the leech's pool for 8 hours (see Concussion Blast, above). A psionic leech can hold up to 10 power points in its pool; if it exceeds this limit the leech reproduces (see Spawn, below). The victim is normally unaware of the power point drain, but can make a DC 14 Will save each minute to negate the drain and become aware of the drain attempt. This ability is the equivalent of a 4th-level power. The save DC is Charisma-based. [/QUOTE]

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