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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 5465174" data-attributes="member: 57383">Too late! <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/laugh.png"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing&nbsp; &nbsp; :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" />There are a few typos in the Master lich.Firstly, the very first sentence has two ls instead of is:&quot;A master lich is a variatlon of the standard lich developed from a combination of incantatlons&quot;Secondly, there are a couple of problems with the Locus Point entry. Shouldn't it be detect evil in &quot;This locus point is a 5 ft. square that radiates faint evil to a detect magic spell.&quot;Better cut the &quot;remains&quot; from &quot;if the floor is destroyed by a disintegrate spell it just leaves the locus point remains hovering in mid air.&quot;Thirdly, the Archmage's attack line has still got a &quot;weapon +16/+11 ranged (xdx)&quot; and is missing a gap in the first &quot;+16melee&quot;. It should be:Attack: Touch +11 melee touch (3d6+5) or staff of fiery power +16 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire)Full Attack: Touch +11/+6 melee touch (3d6+5) or staff of fiery power +16/+11 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire)Apart from those quibbles I <s>think</s> hope we're done.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 5465174, member: 57383"] Too late! :lol: There are a few typos in the Master lich. Firstly, the very first sentence has two ls instead of is: "A master lich is a [COLOR=Red]variatlon[/COLOR] of the standard lich developed from a combination of [COLOR=Red]incantatlons[/COLOR]" Secondly, there are a couple of problems with the Locus Point entry. Shouldn't it be [I]detect evil[/I] in "This locus point is a 5 ft. square that radiates faint evil to a [COLOR=Red]detect magic [/COLOR]spell." Better cut the "remains" from "if the floor is destroyed by a disintegrate spell it just leaves the locus point [COLOR=Red]remains [/COLOR]hovering in mid air." Thirdly, the Archmage's attack line has still got a "weapon +16/+11 ranged (xdx)" and is missing a gap in the first "+16melee". It should be: Attack: Touch +11 melee touch (3d6+5) or [I]staff of fiery power[/I] +16 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire) Full Attack: Touch +11/+6 melee touch (3d6+5) or [I]staff of fiery power[/I] +16/+11 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire) Apart from those quibbles I [S]think[/S] hope we're done. [/QUOTE]

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