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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 6529812" data-attributes="member: 57383">There's some redundancy in the first two sentences, and their burying treasure appears to be a regular habit, not something they only do &quot;sometimes&quot;.Also, I noticed there's some information about their reproductive habits which we might as well include in the background text.How's this:These wingless dragons live in deserts, beaches and similar sandy areas. They love to wander and are often encountered far from their lairs. Dune dragons are basically solitary, but are willing to converse with travelers, sometimes even going so far as to provide helpful information to adventurers. They normally only become aggressive when threatened or if their treasure is disturbed - the hoards of these dragons are usually buried deep under the sand, near or below their own lairs.Female dune dragons produce three eggs once every decade or so, which they bury deep and leave. The hatchlings emerge after a year and instinctively seek out an adult dune dragon to care for it (who may or may not be its parent). The unrestricted society of dune dragons is based on teaching magic to these hatchlings and introducing them to other dune dragons.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 6529812, member: 57383"] There's some redundancy in the first two sentences, and their burying treasure appears to be a regular habit, not something they only do "sometimes". Also, I noticed there's some information about their reproductive habits which we might as well include in the background text. How's this: These wingless dragons live in deserts, beaches and similar sandy areas. They love to wander and are often encountered far from their lairs. Dune dragons are basically solitary, but are willing to converse with travelers, sometimes even going so far as to provide helpful information to adventurers. They normally only become aggressive when threatened or if their treasure is disturbed - the hoards of these dragons are usually buried deep under the sand, near or below their own lairs. Female dune dragons produce three eggs once every decade or so, which they bury deep and leave. The hatchlings emerge after a year and instinctively seek out an adult dune dragon to care for it (who may or may not be its parent). The unrestricted society of dune dragons is based on teaching magic to these hatchlings and introducing them to other dune dragons. [/QUOTE]

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