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<blockquote data-quote="diaglo" data-source="post: 3093964" data-attributes="member: 2885"><p>the style is very much on key with the mid to late 80's version of adventures.</p><p></p><p>only thing i think it could use more of in the beginning is background.</p><p></p><p>why would adventurers be interested? you need to add some more hooks in the intro besides just stopping a band of goblins.</p><p></p><p>is this information common knowledge to the PCs? the fact the ranger tracked them and found their lair. did the ranger come back? why not send a large force to just eradicate the whole warren instead of a small band of adventurers?</p><p></p><p>what's the reward? what do the PCs get to keep? where will this lead them? are there more bands of hobgoblins or goblins? or are they minions of even more powerful monsters like bugbears or ogres?</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="diaglo, post: 3093964, member: 2885"] the style is very much on key with the mid to late 80's version of adventures. only thing i think it could use more of in the beginning is background. why would adventurers be interested? you need to add some more hooks in the intro besides just stopping a band of goblins. is this information common knowledge to the PCs? the fact the ranger tracked them and found their lair. did the ranger come back? why not send a large force to just eradicate the whole warren instead of a small band of adventurers? what's the reward? what do the PCs get to keep? where will this lead them? are there more bands of hobgoblins or goblins? or are they minions of even more powerful monsters like bugbears or ogres? [/QUOTE]
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